This was really good. You portrayed Dan and Jones really well. Cheers!

This was so good. I think you captured Dan really well, too. I especially thought 'Is that the hand you used?' was extremely powerful. Great job.

And I’m sure the floorboards love you too. Don't know why this is my favorite line but I love it.

*sighs happily*

Gorgeous fic, very well characterized! Loved it!

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yeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeye!

i love this!

I have recently become hooked to Nathan Barley!

(Dans life is so unfair! :()

Love this story, keep up natahn barley stories!)

I recently wrote a dan/jones, compared to yours, mine should be burnt!

Loves.

Hey, a Nathan Barley fic - fantastic. There's not enough of these about IMO, which is a bit surprising because the enigmatic and frustratingly fleeting glimpses of Jones in the series make it ideal material for imaginative interpretation -you've managed to do this so well - I really enjoyed this story.

Whoop, whoop lurv this: D

Brave move doing a Dan/Jones fic...

Chris Morris is such a ledge, I listened 2 on the hour 2day it was so awsome I use 2 lurv that show...

Put it on nakedskillsclub thingy that's a great thing on livejournal...

I LOVED this, really, really good.

You should post it on nakedskillsclub.

So sweet :]

Nathan Barley is awesome, only discovered it the other day, but got instantly hooked :]

This is a great little fic, cracked into Dan really well (feel so sorry for him lol, spend all episodes going "aw").

Keep writing xD

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