Gah i just found this fanfiction today and i love love love love (x10) it! 3
Keep up the good work

i loved it go vaith x merleawe wahoo go vaith sigh awesome story loved that it's vaith instead of fern sorry fern but vaith for the win

Aww! Cutee, he proposed

okay my honest review for this is: not that bad but getting married that was way too much for me handle, it's alittle, how do i say this, weird. you now? anyway not bad for a begginer i've seen some pretty suckish begginers thats why i say "it's not that bad"

really this is your first, it's not bad, even though i do prefer mel and fern this story isn't that bad

that was cute liked it and did u read the new chapters ? :)

this really made me smile x3 you wont write anymore of this fanfic? no way! you are like the only person with a decent Vaith and Merleawe fanfic... i am a sad fangirl now... /: anyways it was brilliant! *sque*

That story was adorable

A little shaky with some areas, but it's your first, so I say well-done You're wording and organization were beautifully done, and I hope to see you become an even more amazing writer

Arienne

*sighs with satisfaction* yep yep this DEFINITELY should have happened...

god i so wish something like this happened in Magical x Miracle! i love the MelxVaith coupling it rocks! yay vaith! 3 3 3 3!

...i want more...NOW!

SOO CUTE! Nice one!

Again, chapter's a bit short. Don't exactly understand it too well. Don't take it wrong, I understand and process it fine and fine, but something's missing...

Bit short, but it's nice. I have to admit, I didn't exactly understand it, but great job!

It's a beautiful idea, and well writen on the whole, but I wish you could have drawn it out a bit; the two short chapters don't quite satisfy the reader! In the future, torment your audience by giving suspence to your writing, because you write very well.

Lyralu