...I think the letter and the following scene were the most shocking things in this chapter.

And for real, Ralshiva seemed to give up pretty easily for someone who was underhanded enough to kidnap someone and orchestrate so much violence.

I wonder too, how Hari will be now that the love potion should have been bled out of his eyes? Cause it does seem like Draco's attitude changed... And I wonder if his whole 'Calasier Avamela' attitude was because he was already in love with Draco...? Questions, Questions.

Thanks for this chapter and the previous ones (I wasn't near internet to review, sorry)!

update soon

hey!! thank god that Draco still loves Hari... XDD
and i wonder how the King and Queen gonna react to the situation ?
please update soon!
love your story! XDD

i dont really review much, but ive decided its time i did. So im just going to let you know how much im enjoying this story. keep up the good work, mwah xx

Really? Spur of the moment? I was actually thinking that you came up with the Sirius/Prior idea some time ago, in order to incorporate him in some way.

I have never heard that saying before (is it one?): 'take nothing but memories and leave nothing but your footprints.'

Well, that certainly is a twist. I'm not at all certain I understand what was going on in terms of the love potion and Harry. And was this the first time Draco cried up the potion, cause I thoght the Warmistress induced that, correct me if I'm wrong.

Anywho, thanks for the update!

Let me guess..that secret involves the fact that he's an AU character with OC'- ish qualities, quite possibly self-insertive for the author, and has his name deliberately mispelled to emphasize his non-existent "elven heritage"?

thats evil. anyway i cant believe its almost to the climax. i am surprised about Manastreth though.

So, another cliffhanger huh?
Well, at least they kinda have a plan, or well, a means of how to get there - finer details should come later.
But Sirius, huh? Interesting. So he went to the Elven world when he passed through the veil? I like how you made his life story fit into this story.

Thanks for the update!

Oh damn - what an unforseen twist! The Prior? The Warmistress in disguise? Man! And its such a good plan too - but where would she place Draco during all of this? Ugh, I knew she was smart, but now I'm really beginning to resent her brain. In any case, I hope Manastreth and Noalith get a lead soon.

Thanks for the update!

i dont know but its certainly getting even more interesting if possible. :)

update soon

i think the fainting bit was good. but im glad that Luna is doing ok.

I for one, don't really have a problem believing his fainting. I mean, such an assault on his mind? At least he only blacked out from the shock of it and didn't like, get a migraine or resist it outright. And aw, he becomes something like a little kid around his father!

I look forward to seeing how Noalith and Manastreth work together, especially with Bellime and Luna added. Thanks for the update!

Yup, yup! Don't worry, Mana's past was indeed plausible.

I have to say, Noalith more than deserved the shouts and rage of the Princess of Aqualond. (I even wonder if the shouts are as loud as he is projecting, or if it's just the hangover).

WHile the insight on Hernenda was fascinating, I can't help but thinking she's idiotic for having left the Suppression Rosary anywhere but on her person. That just has a sense of foreboding in my opinion.

Thanks for the update!

I will be honest with you, but I am having a lot of trouble following your story. The first couple of chapters were absolutely incredible, and the addition of Luna was fantastic. I thought this was to be Hari and Draco in the human world. I loved the Slytherins trying to find out what is wrong with Draco, but nothing from the Gryffindors? I was also anticipating a separate storyline of what was going on with Sirius... Basically a story of how the elves doing in the human world, with perhaps some of the evil from their world trying to infiltrate the human world. I am not sure I liked the fact that Hari went crazy again, murdering families and his blade abandon him. I will keep trying to follow this, but it seems to be like the original, and I have already read that one.