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wintersalad
2010-01-07 . chapter 10
I'm in love<3
Drachegirl14
2010-01-03 . chapter 10
(foams at the mouth) HOLY CRAP! Gah it's good why isn't there more to read?!

Oh well.

So this chapter - I liked that it flowed smoothly despite the slight breaks to switch povs.

And this mystery just gets more confusing - why do they want to torture Sakura? Is it someone with a grudge against one of her boys, or is it personally against her?

And on top of that, how are you so stupid to insult Temari? Seriously!

But I laughed out loud when he did, and then said, "Dude, you are gonna die."

No seriously though, it was well written and I enjoyed it despite getting confused with the lack of extra pieces to complete the puzzle. Oh well, that makes a great story!

Please please PLEASE update soon.
QueenThayet12990
2010-01-03 . chapter 10
I did enjoy it...although I got a bit confused at the beginning. Think I've figured everything out now, though. Keep writing!
pillowwolfpup
2010-01-03 . chapter 10
Oh good. I didn't want Matsuri to die. Update soon please.
Lady Azura
2010-01-03 . chapter 10
Yay, an update!

I was so happy to find this in my inbox when I checked my e-mail, and might I add, another fabulous chapter.

The end, especially, is great.
Gaaras1Girl
2010-01-03 . chapter 10
I like the added part about the riots and food hoarding, its very realistic.

Poor Matsuri. Lol, Baki is going to kill that chuunin isn't he?

I loved this line here!: "Not only did she pick socially isolated, emotionally damaged guys, she had to fall for one with the possibility of future warfare as consequence if they had a nasty break up." I think it's great how Temari teases Sakura.

“Having a pulse gets Gaara in trouble with the Village Council,” Holy hell! This line is priceless! Wow...that guy talking to Temari like that REALLY doesn't know what he just got himself into... Great chapter, and I've got a special love for how you write in Gaara's pov. Update soon please!!
aotrs.commander
2010-01-03 . chapter 10
Excellent job as always. It's also nice, for once, to see some fight scenes in Naruto where they're not fighting some stupidly overpowered git one-on-one and instead getting to mulch some mooks for a change. Perhaps it's the gamer in me that just finds the latter a bit more natural, but it's a real nice change of pace!

I certainly look forward the the anticipant pummeling Broken Tooth has just called on himself.

He's probably *lucky* that it's *only* Temari, though, 'cos his brutally messy fate is probably quite merciful compared to what Gaara would be liable to do to him when he finds out what's happened to his favourite - and only - student... (Temari is exceptionally skilled, but Gaara's just got that better talent for brutality...and in this sort of occasion, that's probably a good thing!)

Keep up the good work!
Twisted Musalih
2010-01-02 . chapter 10
I love it! It's really good. Cant wait to read the next chapter. Update soon!!
lizzpercush
2010-01-02 . chapter 10
Great!

I'm not a fan of gratuitous violence, but I'm still waiting for the chapter where Gaara goes berserk and mauls the unfortunate fools who dare to hurt Sakura.

Yeah, Matsuri's getting saved, and the sexist buffoon is going to get his tail whipped.
l'amour-the-poet
2009-12-02 . chapter 9
I'm just starting to read this, but it only took a glance for me to grin. A quality Gaara/Sakura fic! XD
Dealing with the smaller more complex facets of the shinobi world is another plus!
YourAngelStandingBy
2009-11-11 . chapter 7
Awesome story so far.
Drachegirl14
2009-10-23 . chapter 9
Damn.

This story is amazing, I can't believe I wasn't reading this before now!

What I like is that it's serious, realistic to both plot and characters of the 'verse, and that I can laugh at Gaara's social akwardness while still understanding the serious of the situation.

And the whole beginning relationship possibility between Gaara and Sakura? BEautifully done, light, and yet could lead to something more.

Just a quick question, around which time period was this set? I'm guessing pre-shippuden but I could be wrong.

Oh please oh please update soon . . .
curiouslyobsessed
2009-10-16 . chapter 9
=DD congrats on the wrist operation going smoothly and all! do u feel better? hope you do.. you cant strain too much on it right?... or nvm that im just asuming... im not that practical
oh yeah...wooh!! yay this chapter is finally out!!
been waiting...=DD
Gaaras1Girl
2009-10-15 . chapter 9
Greatest chapter in the history of greatest chapters EVER! OMG I almost fell out of my chair at the part with Gaara and Temari! Are you pmsing? TO MUCH! LoL, Poor Temari...I would have strangled Gaara!I feel like I missed something here though -The hand on his shoulder tightened. Her smile turned feral as she spoke. “Gaara, do you remember those ‘moments’ we discussed?”
“Yes.”
“This was one of those.”
“Oh.”
What was Temari talking about?
"The wheels on the bus go ‘round and ‘round…" I never thought that sentence would ever make me laugh so hard! You kill me! Oh I can't wait till your next chapter! No seriously, where is it? (Peeks around corner)
Twisted Musalih
2009-10-14 . chapter 9
I dont just like I love it! Update soon!
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