Well-written vignette. I like it, you're a real good writer. Poor Marty. Lorraine really seems to be unaware of his problems, huh?

Well, I'm looking forward to the next chapter of your main story!

This is a great story! I love it! :)

It's a good thing that, when Lorraine finally kisses Marty, she realizes that he's not the one for her. Otherwise, poor Marty would be stuck!