Poor Nikko! I really like your resolution to the episode...and the series. It's such a shame we never found out where the series would go. But it's typical that Vincent knows what's going on, and even more typical that he isn't saying. Really, really good story. Thank you for posting it.

And this? "Although as far as he knew Vincent only had three basic expressions and he could take a wild guess the man was wearing number two - 'poker king'. Possibly with shadings of number one - 'you amuse me, mortal'." Pure Vincent! LOL!

Love the ending! The rest was great! When's the next chapter?

That was just incredible - everyone's voices were so clearly them (especially Vincent, and oh, how I love good Vincent fic). Nikko's spaz was very realistic, and his subconcious "control" (or lack thereof) well in keeping with the genre. Double points for not being verbose and for good grammar.

Excellent.

Excellent characterization. I'd love to see more!

I'm very happy that you wrote another Veritas story, especially one dealing with what happened at the end of the series.

Awesome! I'm glad to see someone writing Veritas fanfiction. It was an great show.

Keep up the good work.

Tamara

Definitely, definitely this would have been a great episode 14! And I would have screamed at the t.v. again, "This can't be the end!"

Excellent tie-in at the end, "There's the good news: it isn't drugs."

Excellent writing through out!

Great job! I love this show and I have been waiting ages for someone to take up the task of moving on with Nikko's story. You did a wonderful job of capturing the voices and relationships, and I truly hope you plan to continue with it. Take care!

I loved this, it's exactly how I thought the next part would go, Nikko hiding it from the group like that. You had some great characterisations and it all felt like part of the show. Please say there's more?

Awesome story! It played just like episode 14 for me.

"The trick to not being startled by Vincent was to assume Vincent was everywhere at all times and go from there" *snort* too funny! Loved that whole conversation with Vincent and Solomon.

Nicely done. I hope you will be continuing this story. The show ended just when it was getting really interesting. I love how you've captured the character's voices and the 'feel' of the show's epic plot.

Thank you for sharing.

Thank you so much, I've been waiting for someone to do a what happened next story for veritas.

I think you have the characters down to a tee. Well done. I was so disappointed when I got to the bottom of the page and there wasn't more. You have a great skill for characterisation and story telling, well done.

I look forward to the next chapter - how will Solomon cope with Nikko's new abilities and what trouble can Nikko cause :)