love this song and this chapter.

that was really well written! nice balance between her suffering, her trying to impress jacob, and jacob's love for her. great, great job. can't wait for the companion songfic :)

~Rachel :)

awesome story!even though i dont like one-shots...hey have you seen the cullens around lately?

Aaw. I loved it. And I love the song -- I was actually listening to it while reading the story.
Great job. :)
Have a wonderful day!

this story was pretty decent. I feel bad for jake, bella comparing them and all. at least it turned out happy for him in the end :)

This is amazing. I love it. I can't wait for the companion piece.
George

love, loved itt

I enjoyed that.
(and I love the song, I was actually listening to it when I came across this).
Was goods, very well written also.

I love this song and it totally suits the jake/bella thing!
You did a good job in putting it together!

cheers :)
janee

I loved it! And I can't wait to see Edward's side of the story!

I liked this a lot. I am SO deeply Team Edward, when Jake kissed Bella (in this and in the actual series) I felt a little sick to myself.