I like how you kept them in character. The lines "as if he is about to devour her alive, body and soul, heart and mind" and "when he looks at her with eyes softened by something that is not love, not tenderness, but something else, maybe even something more" gave me goosebums! You have done an amazing job with just a few lines.

Cute! I've just started getting into Samurai Deeper Kyo. So far I've just watched the anime and am looking forward to checking out the manga.

I love these two's relationship!

Great job!

this made my heart flutter! so cute

uh so cute i luv it

ah this is so cute...

Short, but awesome job capturing the character relationships. The few lines of dialogue were spot-on.

Very poetic, too.

:D