Just wanted to say that so good

Very interesting start,the Peyton character is very intresting.

Please, please continue.

I love it! Peyton is sexy :D Not as sexy as Sark but still! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Hey, nice start to this story. I'm interested to see where it's going and how it will end up. I like the Peyton/Sark ship myself and have been thinking of writing my own story about them, when I find the energy anyway :)

Nice twist at the end there with Peyton being Irina's third child, I always wondered about Peyton's origin since nothing much was said about her during the series.

I hope you continue with the next chapter soon, looking forward to it!

Peace.