i love this series but i don't think its fair on the reader if you put spoiler in Alliengences page instead it might be easier to post another Alliengences page if their have been loads of changes not after every death though

: I thought that the part with elders and the kits was really funny. It helped out Ghostpaw and Smudgepaw that they turned every part of their apprentice tasks into a competition

Whew! It was a good thing that Ghostpaw saw that vision or Smudgepaw would be yowling up a storm in Maggotstripe’s den about losing her leg.



I personally think Rowanstar knows his son is hiding something from him.

This series keeps on getting better and better!

I love the new prophecy:

A winded ghost, a flaming tiger, an eagle's feather, a fern of green, and a blazing moon shall come together. Their destinies entwine to heal a love divine. The sunhigh sky is split in two, and the morning dew will give a clue. Follow the ancient path of the river to find the sky, or all shall watch the sky die.
“One friend from old, one who is quite bold. Two groups at war. The bold are looking for more. Know that conflict is not the answer. Find the eyes of terror and know that all is secure.
“Four is one again, one is four again. Tiger and Lion shall return with all their power. The fate of the forest is in the claws of the kin of the flower. One brother will survive and watch his kin perish by the paws of an ancestor. The lake will tremble with his grief and then the striped chief will be no more.”

Wow! How in the name of starclan did you come up with that? It's amazing!

Poor Ghostpaw. he was unable to stop the fox from killing Softcreek even though he had that vision.

Uh oh! Whiskerstar and Squirrelflower's argument about whether or not she betrayed him by seeing Orion a causing a huge divide within SkyClan!

Since they are in the prologue, does that mean that SkyClan will be involved in the story later on?

Very nice story! I enjoy reading it very much.