Ah, amazing. This was the moment we've all been waiting for, and it's beautifully-written.

That's certainly quite a performance by Dhenalix and Darkrai.

Wonder how Zhoke will react though.

And congrats on surpassing a hundred thousand words!

Horray, huzzah, and yippie-ki-yay! 3

Just the moment that many, if not all, your readers have been waiting for! Such a satisfying moment indeed. D

Great chapter, our author-that-is-saying-she's-sucky-but-when-she-rea lly-isn't-sucky-and-requires-a-long-chained-senten ce.

Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to wipe this stupid smile that my dad saw me with while I was reading this chapter...

That was awsome. Rock on, Lucario!

STOP PUNISHING YOURSELF. That was awsome dude!

AHMYGOD! I've been looking forward to this for so long! I'm so glad these two are together. And stop saying your chapters suck, cause they're amazing as usual. How many more chapters are you planning to write?

And are you going to update A Super Smash Story? I love the way you write Pikachu!

Surprise appearance by Darkrai! But, it was really well done, and the scnees were very well-described. The part about being Marked was quite interesting, too.

The part where Lucario recalled past memories with Aurora during her part of the ceremony was great, too. Short, but powerful memories.

The difference between Lucario and Zhoke over Aurora's eyes is rather poetic, didn't seem it coming. Great job there, too.

hawk

I guess it makes sense for some legends appearing randomly...(since Lucario IS something special)... As long EVERY one of them doesn't do that...

I though that as Darkrai was going to do ancient tomb in as joke since he probably has creepy voice... I didn't except there REALLY being cemetery under building...(though how did our main cast find them if humans didn't know of them?I didn't really get that..)

...I do admit that this chapter could have been better but its definitely better than most ones I have seen(because usual ones fail at expressing emotion and just make things magically happy...)... Though... I don't know is it possibly write confession scene with this scenario that I would like... I guess its because I don't know what would happen in real life...

Anyway... You aren't sucky...(I do know horrors that are actually sucky P)

Yay, can't wait to see how things will turn out the next chapter! The end left me wanting to know! _ As far as messing up, eh, you're far from it. 3

Surprise visit from Darkrai was certainly unexpected, but would indeed be an advantage. 3

I await you next chapter with patience. 3

On the contrary, these two chapters were great.

The way how you portrayed Lucario's heart regaining hope, just to be broken again, as well as the part where Lucario finally breaks down in tears - very well done.

True, Zhoke did randomly appear, but he has a migrating trainer anyway. "One of the remote regions of Sinnoh", not too remote for Zhoke's trainer, unfortunately.

Interesting to see how this will continue. Great job!

hawk

Aww crab... Shes become even more self critical...

I guess it suits Mew's personality randomly to appear to play.

Anyway... I have to agree that chapt 24 was little overemotional... And that I find idea of Pokemon wedding crashing(somehow third word makes it even stranger for me(though I have actually come in conclusion that pokemon wedding itself wouldn't be that weird...Just if its like Christian weddings(dress, tuxedo,(correct word?)cake...)) even more weirder that mammal Pokemon laying egg... And Zhoke DID come rather randomly...

And this chapter is not that much shorter than normally(judging by thing you can use to scroll page in right)... And even if it were, occasional short chapters aren't bad...

Such powerful emotions! From anxiety, sadness, rage, sadness again, nostalgia, understanding, and hope! Oh joy, this has really gotten me excited!

And all those feelings from a chapter that's shorter than the usual ones. You should be proud of yourself. 3

Continue on. I can't wait to see how this would all turn out. D

Don't be too harsh on yourself; your work is great.

Once again, I didn't see this coming; this story is certainly full of surprises. This chapter was very emotional, which isn't a bad thing. It's a twist that leaves me wondering what will happen next.

The previous chapter was beautifully written too, though of course, Mandite had to ruin the moment. XD

I'm not going to lie to you, it was short, and a bit over-emotional, but it was a very interesting twist to things, eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Oh, darn you Mandite. Oh well, we still love ya. 3

Ah, a happy chapter. I would say that because I was wearing a foolish smile as I read your chapter. Score one for KOOZ. I never smile. XD

And another point for making me cry out in agony when Mandite ruined the moment. 3

Continue on to the next chapter! I shall wait patiently as usual! D

But that's very sad, regarding how his parents would defend their territory against him.

The final sentence seems to suggest the story is ending really soon... I thought it was a powerful and rather poetic way to end the chapter. It makes me wonder what kind of ending this story will have.