That was brilliant, they way you conveyed Rin's emotions. Keep up the good work

I thought it was really good, especially for a first non-school poem. My only complaint is that I read it aloud as I read it, and it sounds a little off to me, but my understanding of poetry and rhythm is next to none. XD The last two lines are my favorite.

Hm...I probably should go and listen to the song...

This was a very good poem! I am very bad a poetry, and I'm amazed as to how you can rhyme!

Kudos!

-Shana-san

This was a really well written poem. kyah! So cute w -favorites-