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Twilight Okami
2009-10-13 . chapter 26
Hey ya all. YukikoTheSnowChild, are you going to update this again? I hate waiting, so I suggest that ya update this good (for a romance) story! And note to ya all. Can someone PLEASE Review my story!
Twilight Okami
2009-10-13 . chapter 1
Hello everyone! I'm new on the net! Anyway, I like this story a lot for a romance. You should update again, for I just love this story. A good WakaxOc story, the best. Please update! Oh, and check my Okami Parody story!
blackwolf2dragoon
2009-10-07 . chapter 26
Aw man I love this! I really do! I can only see one error of typos being around the place, maybe try looking over it before posting it just to be sure xD
I so do hope you continue with this work! I'm really enjoying it so far, keep up the good work!
~Blackie
xXxAiriinxXx
2009-10-06 . chapter 26
A UPDATE!

YEAHY! I'm so happy that you updated! I waited =D
hehe, Very nice

lol Waka Cursed! Yes yes, Yuri is turning his mind up side down... IN A GOOD WAY... I think XD

By the way, what are they going to do there... but there were hot springs! cool, Yuri might enjoy those XD

UPDATE SOON PLEASE! :D
Taku-chan
2009-09-24 . chapter 23
O.o wow... thats the darkest part in all of this. ^_^ good job. It really captured the emotion behind Yuri, why she does things and how she acts. I think its great that you added more to Yuri than just the present. It makes me wonder how she's going to handle things, if she'll just go on or will she change some? Its also nice that you took the time while Yuri was asleep to take Waka's side of the story, its nice to have both. A one sided story can get boring. Have fun on your vacation :3 Im looking forward to reading more.
Taku-chan. -^_^-
Taku-chan
2009-09-22 . chapter 20
Kwaii! I love your story... i think i've re-read it 3 times now >.<" its amazing. Its great how u dont just copy the game word for word, its nice to see a different take on it. ^_^ Keep writing ur awesome at this.
(( btw, sorry about u being sick ^_^ hope get better. ))
moonsvhild
2009-09-05 . chapter 24
are you going to continue this story?
OKAMI LOVER
2009-09-05 . chapter 24
please update soon Thank you, Merci
Moonschild
2009-08-23 . chapter 24
I love it! You HAVE to continue it!! I've been waiting a long time for a great story, now i've found it!
xXxAiriinxXx
2009-07-17 . chapter 23
wooh~
An update! yeah!

Awe poor Yuri-Chan. She had a sad past.
So touching. And her father, urgh! I could choke him to death!
Good work though! I gotta say ^.^

Update soon please, Looking forward to it ^-^
geminixdragon
2009-06-30 . chapter 21
Yays you updated! This has to be my favorite WakaxOC story. though Why Did I Fall in Love with You! comes in a very close second. Please update soon and yeah writers blocks stink
Gentle Catastrophe
2009-06-30 . chapter 21
It took me almost forever to realize you updated. Dx
And don't worry! You're not the only one recovering from writer's block! :'D

Anyway, it was a good chapter, and I really enjoyed the beginning. I'll be one of the readers looking forward to the next chapter.
xXxAiriinxXx
2009-06-30 . chapter 21
awe~

YEAHY! A new chapter! hehehe...
This chapter was sweet!
Oh my, Both are so obvious... but still they.. hehe.. ^/^
sweet... thats all i can say... =)

Welcome back to this story! chi-hi
Amaterasu Myuu
2009-06-17 . chapter 20
Please please please please PLEASE update again! This is my favorite Waka story EVER! Besides your other one... They're great! :D
Gentle Catastrophe
2009-06-06 . chapter 20
This is a really cute story. :]

Grammar wise, it could be worked on a bit, and some parts are a little repetitive (besides the blushing), but other than that, it's turning out to be interesting.

Also, somewhere in the story when Waka is speaking French, you made him say 'Qui' instead of 'Oui'. 'Qui' is a french meaning 'who'. 'Oui' means 'yes'. Just thought I'd let you know.

Keep up the good work. ^^
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