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Reaper's Shadow
2009-11-11 . chapter 7
Short but cute. And I agree with Souji about that level being annoying. As much as I enjoy games, I prefer them when my eyes aren't hurting.

Looking forward to the next chapter!
Viktor Mayrin
2009-09-28 . chapter 6
No, no. It's cool.

Dumb!Souji always has a place. 'Specially around the ladies, methinks.

"Dude. Seenpai. You okay?" Kanji asked hesitantly.

Souji's arm raised from the ground where he'd fallen, giving his Kohai the bird. "You will never ** mention that I faceplanted while on my way to a date because I pirouetting."

There was a pregnant pause. "Senpai, do you want a hand getting up?"

"...Yes."
Darkforce222
2009-09-27 . chapter 6
International Speak In Italics Day

I like badass!Souji but I also always pictured him to have a goofy/mischievous sense of humor, and there are times when he just acts like a big idiot("oh hey fridge grass om nom nom"). Why can't he be both? Either way, I like your Souji quite a bit.

This was cute as usual. We really never see Yukiko in anything less than elegance(even when plastered) so this was interesting to see. I just like the idea of Souji randomly ambushing Yukiko during the day. And the "yukiko i'm hot it's hot :(" group call amused me more than it should have.

I remain entertained. Good show.
Reaper's Shadow
2009-09-27 . chapter 6
Not bad! Keep it up!
fox-white-moon
2009-09-27 . chapter 6
It very long time since your last updated,

Yeah! Souji and Yukiko have finally been a couple.

hmm... Souji really don't know about home duties (after all Nanako do it all) but he know about how to cook, right?

well plese updated nect chapter

I want to know what next chpter will be
aimakichan
2009-09-26 . chapter 5
Hm~ I like this take. ^^ Can't wait to see more!
Happykate0007
2009-09-24 . chapter 3
Great story! I loved it.
Darkforce222
2009-07-18 . chapter 5
BOO GET OFF THE STAGE

Okay, this wasn't that bad, though it was a bit jarring to have melancholy thrown into my fluffy cuteness. Still, it'll make future fluff all the better so it all works out in the end.

I think it's a law at this point that Souji/Yukiko cannot exist without some kind of wrenching heartbreak at one point.

But yeah, while not nearly as much as the fluffiness, I still enjoyed this.
fox-white-moon
2009-07-18 . chapter 5
yeah you finally updated,

I want to cry because in this chapter Yukiko being couple to Yosuke and Souji with Chie WHAT THE HECK (I will have nightmare after this

please updated more chapter

I cannot wait to know what next chapter will be
Reaper's Shadow
2009-05-19 . chapter 4
Interesting idea. I had never thought of using dreams like that in my stories. I look forward to the rest!
Darkforce222
2009-05-14 . chapter 4
Corny and sweet. I loved it.
heylalaa
2009-05-13 . chapter 4
i'm so happy that you already updated this! and... it's short, but overall, it's a good chap! please update again :D
fox-white-moon
2009-05-12 . chapter 4
It very long time since your last updated this story,

Finally you have updated

hmm... this time you make a dream for this story.

it kind of short this time but it still a very good story

please updated more

I want to read what story for SoujixYukiko's romance in your next updated
Darkforce222
2009-03-20 . chapter 3
Given the theme, I thought this one would have something to do with the Amagi Challenge, but this was pretty great too. It's pretty interesting also how her name for him changes over time too, from "Seta-kun" to "Souji-kun". It's the little details I appreciate most, I think.

Looking forward to the next one.
yuiyui
2009-03-15 . chapter 3
Oh okaay i know you're updating before i say that comment on my deviantart page lol

Hmm i like this chapter, but the 2 previous chapter still won my heart.. idk this chapter is good, but uh.. it's just missing something.

Anyways, mitsuru looks good with piano rather than yukari rofl. Can't wait to see more, go picup!
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