Wow… I love your plot, the whole story is so catching and I can hardly wait to the next chapter :D
The story is so intense whit Amanda tempting Edward.
Loved it and I like Amanda, she is so outgoing. And that she has all the power in their “relationship” is a nice twist. That Edward is so confused is so funny...
But it is some confusing what their story is. How did she found out what she is. are they in love?
Plies, plies, plies continue writing this amazing story: D

Wow this is really good, goes so in line with how Edward would really act and think, people do continue this im always on the look out for Edward/OC fanfics, not because i dont like Bella, just wondered like you how it would be if Edward was with something more outgoing

looking forward to chapter one