I so hope you decide to continue this great story!

Wispr

I like how you are writing the building tension between the Maquis and Star Fleet personnel. Also you are doing a wonderful job with how the story line is moving along. The pacing is just right and the plot is clear and easy to follow.


Great job!


Wispr

Just love how you are doing the Voyager and B5 crew interacting... the changes in the canon story line are believable and very realistic.

You really have done an outstanding job with everyone's personalities... they come across very alive and with depth.

Wispr

Love how you wrote Ulkesh's mindset... really came across as believable and fleshed out his character quite well.

Like how isolationist Janeway is coming across, I could easily imagine her getting like this due to be even more cut off from home. Plus with how Sheridan went about declaring independence.

Wispr

Wow love the chapter, really like the longer lengths of these chapter to.

You really dong a great job with how you have interwoven the Voyager crew into the developments of the B5 universe.

Wispr

Another awesome chapter, your writing skills has visibly increase since the first story of this series. Good bit with how reluctant Janeway is to get involved, something you really don't see in other crossovers of this nature.

Wispr

Oh so happy to see Galen, (hope I got the spelling right), in your story. Really love how you are writing the growing plot lines. Bloody captivating.

Wispr

Wonderful intro to your sequel... really like how the story/plot line is already developing.

Wispr

Nice to see another update to this story.

Hopefully they can capture Biggs before he gets to Ivanova.

I'm wondering how Janeway is going to react to Chakotay being hurt. I'm also wondering what she will do if/when Seven mentions Galen.

I'm hoping that Janeway doesn't lockdown even more than she already has. Her previous reactions are somewhat understandable, but in a way, she is setting a dangerous precident.

I like the follow up on this chapter. You've made Zack show some of his feelings for Lyta. I hope you finally bring them together. Also, hurray on getting most of the Voyager involve in helping out B5. Also, Biggs should be afraid of Ivonnva than her fearing for her life. Com'on, I'm more afraid of her in that universe and while you are at it, get Janeway to have some sort of revelation or speak with Drall. She's a great captian and needs to come around. Or, get Tuvok to consul her. Still, keep up the good work.

good update

I hope Refa will still die.

Maybe you can Hook-up Zack and Lyta.

I'm so glad that somebody (and I'm glad that it's Zack) is performing an intervention so Lyta isn't going to be Ulkesh's punching bag anymore. On that note, I miss the real Kosh.

I am so happy to see an update. I really have been waiting to see more of this story. I love this univierse and look forward to seeing where you take the people in it. This and your BSG stories are among my favorite of all times. Please keep them coming when you have the time. Thank you for sharing.

Lisa

I think its Biggs who should be running scared. You do NOT want a PO Ivanova on your case! No way, no how! Messing with Sheridan 2nd in command is NOT a way to live long!

Ack?
It seems everything going down hill at the moment. Not too good. Looking forward to more. Keep writing!