Nice to see another update to this story.

Hopefully they can capture Biggs before he gets to Ivanova.

I'm wondering how Janeway is going to react to Chakotay being hurt. I'm also wondering what she will do if/when Seven mentions Galen.

I'm hoping that Janeway doesn't lockdown even more than she already has. Her previous reactions are somewhat understandable, but in a way, she is setting a dangerous precident.

I like the follow up on this chapter. You've made Zack show some of his feelings for Lyta. I hope you finally bring them together. Also, hurray on getting most of the Voyager involve in helping out B5. Also, Biggs should be afraid of Ivonnva than her fearing for her life. Com'on, I'm more afraid of her in that universe and while you are at it, get Janeway to have some sort of revelation or speak with Drall. She's a great captian and needs to come around. Or, get Tuvok to consul her. Still, keep up the good work.

good update

I hope Refa will still die.

Maybe you can Hook-up Zack and Lyta.

I'm so glad that somebody (and I'm glad that it's Zack) is performing an intervention so Lyta isn't going to be Ulkesh's punching bag anymore. On that note, I miss the real Kosh.

I am so happy to see an update. I really have been waiting to see more of this story. I love this univierse and look forward to seeing where you take the people in it. This and your BSG stories are among my favorite of all times. Please keep them coming when you have the time. Thank you for sharing.

Lisa

I think its Biggs who should be running scared. You do NOT want a PO Ivanova on your case! No way, no how! Messing with Sheridan 2nd in command is NOT a way to live long!

Ack?
It seems everything going down hill at the moment. Not too good. Looking forward to more. Keep writing!

Good chapter, except that the Lyta & Zack parts are inconsequent.

This is going great. But could someone please, before too long, give Janeway a reality check (Ivanova, maybe? That would be a really interesting (not to mention potentially dangerous) conversation), because she really needs one. She's committing one of the most dangerous mistakes anyone can: jumping to conclusions when she doesn't have all of the information, and doesn't even know half of what's going on. Her holier-than-thou attitude always drove me crazy, and I can't see anyone on B5 (Ivanova in particular) being able to stand that. She can't stay in isolation just because of the Prime Directive. She's not even in the same universe anymore, and eventually, someone (maybe her or maybe not her) is going to realize the inevitable truth, that in the B5 universe, those who sit around and do nothing, that those who refuse to get involved usually end up being blown to smithereens.

I just read all seven chapters and so far this is a very interesting story. A lot of twists and turns with some of the characters. I'm a little taken on the fact that Janeways character is a little darker than is normally portrait. I hope you have her see the light and join up with Sheridan. Still, a good story. Keep it up and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Your stories on BB5 and voyager rock. Just thought you should know.

Thank you for another update, this one I found the beginning and end my favorite parts. I simply love the romance with Lillian and Chakotay, even when it isn't the focus it is. The part with the tech was delightful and Lyta put into words part of the reason I loved Kosh (the original) and why he was my favorite B5 character, which made the end one I nearly whooped out loud with delight.

Great stuff, it's nice to see that you have continued Kansas.

I think that the Seven and tenchnomages storyline is the most interesting of all.

Oh, you've got something planned, don't you. I'm truly looking forward to what you've got. I can't wait. Keep writing!

I hope that Kosh, or whatever is left of him, can help deal with Ulkesh. That is, if it isn't already too late.

Janeway is still, IMO, going to get a rude wakeup call soon. Even though she doesn't want to get involved, things are compounding against her, and something is going to give. I can see her not wanting to get involved directly with galactic affairs, but while she is at Babylon 5, her and her ship and crew are at risk to anything bad that goes on at the station.