omg if you make her lose her memories that would be so evil lol. Sometimes you do have you characters ooc with what they say but no biggie, you seem to have gotten better with it as you continued. You got a really fun story here, I like your OC and the interactions between Aki and Naruto are really lame but in a really cute way lol, I'm enjoying it so far.

I wish there were more NarutoxOC stories around they are really fun to read, I'm starting one myself too :)

cliffy oh your evil ! still great story <3 :D

nice chapter and I'm sad she lost her memories of her recent friends forever now.

uhmm shikamaru's last name is Nara not Haru

Why you little...?! How could you just end it there?! Why Lerryn?! WHY?!?!?! TToTT
... um... yeah... Anywho this was fantastic! I simply love love love LOVED it!
I can't wait to see how everyone will cope with her memory loss! ^o^
You're writing has gone extremely better and the ending the chapter with a cliffy is PURE evil... I'M SO PROUD OF YOU! *glomps*
The one thing I kind of found a little annoying and out of place is how she dishes out like 5 questions in a row in one page line. There should have been some space between them filled with something other then more questions.
Other then that, it was simply brilliant and I sure as hell wasn't expecting that!
Keep up the GREAT work!

I blow you a kiss!

NO

NEOOWW!

Poor Naru-chan..You're making him suffer on purpose, aren't you?!

Update, please~

OMG! It finally up! You sure took your sweet time with this one. And. I. LOVED IT! Hahahahaha! Both Naruto and Aki are really kick-**!
And I just noticed that you my dear Lerryn simply love to EAVESDROP! I mean you always keep reading my mind, like always stop me from singing 'Three Days Grace - Pain' right before I actually start singing it and now you have Aki eavesdrop on Naruto's thoughts. Tsk, tsk, tsk *scolds with finger* you really do have a thing for eavesdropping don't you my little Lerryn-chan?
Anywho this was BLOODY AWESOME! I love love LOVED it and I do hope you up-date more often ^-^

I blow you a kiss

great update

'Ugly, selfish dog'?
I'm sorry Lerryn, but that just doesn't sound right. He's a DUCK-BUTT for Pete's sake! Not a dog! Dog are cute, and cuddly, and eat your slippers, and slobber all over the carpet... did I mention that they were cute?
So anywho, I can't wait to see what happens next ^-^ Hope you snap out of your laziness or I'll snap you out of it myself! (smiles sweetly) Okay? ^-^
P.S. That's not a threat, it's a promise ^-^

The story is way to interesting to be not-up-dated frequently, D-O I M-A-K-E M-Y-S-E-L-F C-L-E-A-R?! Good!
I blow you a kiss and keep on writing

hi, this is good.
XD

Oh, thanks! Really, amazing storoy you have, can't wait for more :)

Please update!

Yay, you updated!

I went back and re-read chapter 1 before writing my reply, and I noticed a definitive improvement in your grammar and punctuation. But what really makes a story good is the voice you project into it. This is what gives your story so much power! Keep up the good work!

Aki has a katana...? I LIKE HER ALREADY! Lerryn I like the chapie, ur not an idiot just a big selfcritc, so don't cha' worry ur little pretty head *taps Lerryn on the head* It's not that boring and ur writing is improving... Not that it wasn't good before ^^


Up-date soon, xxKitty-girlxx

good chapter...and i wonder...what's gonna happen in the next chapter