cruel cliffy!

This is like,rated T.

Beautiful story but I thought it kinda anticlimantic at the end...I mean it was going SOOO well and I was so waiting for that lemon.

And then it ends. You should CONTINUE it damn it. This story is good and has a hell of a lot of potential. XD

i like it but it not enough to be rated M. T, yes. M, no.

no terminastes el lemon aunque me gusto mucho este fic

GYAH NO! CONTINUE DAMNIT! XD I love it...

Ari chan

Love it.

Hello!

I'm a very good friend of Angelicheart, and I would like to say what an exotic and intoxicating story you've conjured!;)

It was very fluid and very unexpecting!

You made the story sweet, yet it was just enough for a young reader to read...so, YAY!XD

Their characters were just a hint OC, but who cares?X3

It was realistic, if you get my drift!

It seems plausible with the actually OVAs/TV!

Please, keep writing, for I enjoy and admire your stories!

Also, I draw Munto stuff as well!

If you'd like, you can see them on my Deviantart page!

My username is animeloverXD!

Anyway, wonderful work, dear, wonderful!:D

I am so sorry I couldn't review this until now!

but you did it, first M fic in this archive! and it was nicely done too, the only thing I wish was that this had been their first time, and Yumemi was a bit bold, but oh well. it was still worth waiting for!

and thanks very much for the dedication XD

... I think I've died and gone to smut heaven.

This was incredibly well-done. The imagery is just.. well, HOT and somewhat poetic. I love everything about this.

And thanks for mentioning me in the dedication. *blushes* I feel very honored to be mentioned.

I hope to see more stories like this in the future. Write when you can.

Sweet! That was, well, amazing. I love your fics. The way you describe things and the emotions you put into them. Wow! And this one was remarkable! Great Job!

yay for M! yay for this couple! yay for this fic! XD

very nice job, good descriptions as always and the feel was once again very comfortable and familiar 3 the only qualm I have is that Yumemi being anything less than bashful in the uh, experience, is kind off OC-ish though Munto's personality is one I can picture XD nice work, and I'm glad you got this out, a landmark in Munto fanfiction

keep up the good work!

AK! So adorable! *squeal!* I had the end theme of the series playing in the background- perfect! The emotion in this piece was just so right.

Happy birthday, by the way! Just so you know, I might be uploading a certain someone's birthday present on Sunday... MAYBE... teehee