aw
*sniffs*
...
wah you made me cry that song just...
...*deep breathe kerry*
ok i guess it just reminded me of the games ending and i wanted to cry the second i figured out what song it was.
i love the way you seem to get inside Zacks head as you read it i could picture the scene erfectly

Aww...cute fic! I love that song and it works so well with FFVII, especially Zack. Anyway! Personally, I despise all forms of yaoi, (No offense) so I like to think this was nice and brotherly. Just my opinion...but it was awesome, sweet, fluffy, and good fun. Nice job!

It's so sad what ends up happening after that. It's such a tragedy. I feel bad for the puppy's parents. I'm sure they're pretty sad in the end too. And to think, they never know what happened to their son.

*droops* depressing...poor Zack.

Aw, so sad. I remember watching "Last Order" for the first time, and it made me cry when I remembered that Zack had died (I've never played FFVII, although I know the complete storyline).

Aww, that was sweet. Yeah, not nearly wallowing the hilarity we had at the hotel, but I like this version... very Zack-like.

I give a lot of credit to Zack for putting up with everything he did trying to get Cloud to Midgar. No many others would do it.

I like this piece. It flows well and works the emotions nicely. Good job.