I started reading this story as well...

and it looks good. Wow...Rose is captured. Hopefully she will get away soon.

please update soon, I love this whole possesive dark doctor thing you have going on!

omg this is soo cool..love both torchwood and doctor who...soo much that tonight watching torchwood :)

Great chapter, can't wait for more. Please update soon

YAYZEE!! The prequel!
Marvy, QUACKITY QUACK, and pistachio coolio chappies!
This is a vair, vair myusterious and groovy idea!! Your characterisation is brillopads, and I'm luurving this whole theme.
Oo-er, Gwen and Rose have been taken?! CaN't at to find out what happens next.
One thingymajig: perhaps you could describe and expand setences/paragraphs into more depth? It would make it just gthta bit more NACHO CHEESE! lolz!
LUURVING THIS...
=D =D =D =D =D

can't wait. feisty, eh? definitely loving this story. now, why would aliens try and kidnap pregnant woman, and what's gonna happen to Rhys? something, obviously, but I guess I'm gonna have to wait and see.

it's a really good story and i can't wait for more chapters

This is realy good so far, but I do have some things to say.
You need to fan it out more. Instead of saying "They walked", how did they walk? What was around them? Give extra detail that the reader doesn't know but wants to.
Also, some of your punctuation is a bit iffy; you sometimes miss question marks on the end of sentences that are questions.
Keep on writing, and I hope to see the next chappie soon!
IfEaRnOfIsH

Cool. I love Rose and the 10th Doc. Keep it up. Jack is feisty too - I have not seen enough Torchwood but I loved him when he was introduced.

Hi

i really like this story and i'm excited for the next chapter

xoxo

I know this chapter has its issues. Be it spelling, grammer, or using the wrong two to too thingy. But that is what happens when your laptop doesn't want to co-operate. I just got the blasted thing and it doesn't want to download things properly or allow me to add anything. If I have to, I will use a dictionary and have a friend proof-read the next few chapters. Wish me luck on getting the laptop to work. Curse Windows Vista!

Really good storyline - I'm finding it most enjoyable. Just one note of advice, make sure you spell check and grammar check before publishing as there are a number of errors in the text. Otherwise great!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Omg this story is amazing! I can't believe you haven't got that many reviews, it's so good! Please keep it up, you're really good at writing. x

Good chapter.I can't wait to find out what's happening.Bless the Doctor and Rose.

o i'm really looking forward to the next chapter get it up quick lol. loving this!