Great work.I'd say more but nothing can really sum up how like the book that was. Faving =)

Or maybe, that's the moment when life ends?

Wow. I really really enjoyed this story. This is totally Chuck Palahnuick type thoughts and I loved it!! So honest, though depressing, but still... I can't wait to read more from you. :)

haha its reall really god!

you really know how too write. you've got some serious talent and i can't wait to read more of your work. have you written any original stories that i might be able to read?

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This shows great writing, I can almost imagine Tyler Durden speaking those exact words.
It's almost like some kind of poetry.
Really good work.
Gina
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