it has been more than 3 months of a break still no ending.. and its ending with such a cliff hanger ... ugh

awesom story

but i think its time u should update

pleez

I love the story :) ...update soon!

Great story, i really hope you finish it!

i love this story! its so real! I love what you did with the characters also. this is a ultimate great story! BTW, I need input on my story; it called Budding Love. it my frst so i want to know sorta what you think about it so far.

I found your story last night and just finished reading it. I look forward to new updates/chapters after you get a chance to post. I must admit that I have been wrapped up reading your well written story instead of working. It was that captivating. :-) Keep up the good work

ok

awe, cute!
i loved it so much!
please please update really soon!
ASAP?
I cannot wait for the next amazing chapter!

Your writing id perfectly fin at the moment, what are you talking about. Love the story, keep going
-bella

i really like your story. i didnt think it sucked at times. anywhoo, yes you will finish it. lol

what? im like completely lost!! what on earth is up? wouldnt she be able to recognize the scent? or does she know, why is she angy? hehe *blonde* anyways, great chapter, update soon, so i can catch up with what the hell is going on.. hehe =/

I loved this chapter for all of Nessie's side of things when she was a baby. I feel like your interpretation is very canon. You stuck to the themes from the books and turned it around from her perspective really well.

I also appreciate that you have her being aware of the imprinting and her connection to Jacob. I must say it annoys me when people write J/N stories and make it out as if she has no clue about him until she's a teenager. Seriously? That makes no sense.

Great work! I can't wait for more =)

ohh what hapened?? i'm so confused! how long has she been going to school?? the whole time?and does she have any idea who she is meeting?? can't wait for more!

Okay, who is it and what did Nessie do!! UPDATE!! PlEaSe!

Guess Who?
It's Me!! =)
Hey Mandy,
So, stuf i liked
I Liked the bit at he start, looking more into Nessie's first moments
It was nice to see why Bella bending over caused all this =)
I also liked the school scene
I have put the names of my friends to your characters lol
They are so believable
And Aaron, despite being a cocky little Sh*t is very much like my boyfriend =P

The Rosalie bit was sweet, even though it was short. I always imagened their connection to be fairly damn strong =)

And The Pressure Gun has made it's entrance =D
I Heart The Pressure Gun lol

Great chapter
And i don't think it was a filler
We found out lots of important stuff =)
Emily
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