Nice, the voice of Heero's mind is really in character. You also used very vivid language and stayed true to the other character's personalities as well.

I like it.
it was really simple and sweet, and a good way of writing him and how he views everything with life, relena and the preventers.

Short, but well written fiction! I like the calmness Heero felt when he is with her. Please write more!

I wasn't sure at first but once I came to the end... I really like it. His string of thoughts is so Heero. I'm writing a story myself but I can never easily come up with whats going on inside that mind of his. I give you props!