are you going to write a sequal. Please. I'll tell Vexen to quit making ice around your house.

:D :D :D

nothing warms my heart more than a good ol' story about Axel getting off and a certain blonde there getting horny in the process.
and not only is it a beautifully written lemon, but the depth and train of thought Roxas had actually made me go back and read it again. :33 yes, i've read it 3 times already.

so, yes. i'ma go 'n' read what other pretties you call stories. hahaha, well... keep it up.:D :D :D

Your work is proof that (insert diety of choice here) loves the people on this website and wants them to be happy.

You really are an incredible writer. It's obvious you put SO much love and devotion into each paragraph but with such ease that your work never seems forced. It flows smoothly and beautifully.

Even with a topic that at any moment could turn tongue-bitingly cheesey, you've managed to make it a work of art.

How you're not a published writer yet is completely beyond me.

Fantastic job.

Hey ya sis...I just noticed that I had yet to actually review this fic...so here goes...

Awesome! Super yummy num-num...Wow!

Loved it...can you tell?

Massive nosebleed...Axel masterbating is tastey...Woot!

Hot-damn :O! So I totally thought it was Axel after the first few paragraphs XD (poor Axel; everyone knows he's a stalker). It's extremely difficult to write without any dialouge between characters and not have the reader loose interest/relate to the story but I have no complaints with this one. Seriously *hearts* Awesome job! *_
Tekko

That was awesome, the lack of dialogue kept it intriging. And the way I read it I got to the bottom of the page and when I scrolled down was when Axel said, "Roxas..." Epic.
Very nice!

That was so hot...oh my goodness. Whew. I wish I could do that tendrils of darkness thing...I'd not mind being a voyeur...:P

loved this! axel jerking off is the hottest thing i've probably ever read. can you do like a whole lemon including axel jerking off for roxas? roxas has to be uke though. *puppy eyes* please?

Excellent story. It is hard to write without dialoge, but you managed quite nicely. Good work. Keep it up!

it's amazing I love it anywayz it's amazingly written

Really? The part with no dialogue was the hard part? I would think the having feeling without feeling in this would be the hardest part XD. Damn those nobodies! :laugh
This was very well written. And Roxas!Stalker(not really is awesome. I kind of just love the idea of him watching Axel masturbate and vice versa with the(not so subtle hints you gave at the end there. Okay, so they're both creepy. And they get off on that XD. It's cool.

I really liked this. Roxas both acknowledging that he has no feelings, just echoes and memories that cannot hold a flame to the actually thing, while still realizing that he wants Axel. Trully wonderful. I mean, I've read a lot of fics that go on about how it's true feeling that they have, but you never for a minute said that the things the felt were real. And that's how(at least I feel Organization XI was pre-Kingdom Hearts II.

Once again I really liked it. And even with only one line of dialogue, this is AMAZING! Just love it! Great job! kodoku na oujo

M, MASTURBATION. :D

This is really hot, lol.

You've got great description going on here.

I like the change of pace with the Stalker!Roxas instead of the role stereotypically going to Axel. And there was a good incorporation of that almost-feeling without it being like HOMAHGAWD I LOVE AXEL EVEN THOGUH I DON'T HAVE A HART! Keep up the good work.

OK. While I've seen about forty-million AkuRoku stories with the exact same plot you've got here, there's something about it that makes it different from the rest. The first-person POV seems to drift in and out of reality. It's excellent.

8.8/10

HM

PS: Sorry I haven't been around much here, I got a Livejournal, and... yeah. Did you know that according to the fanfic community at LJ, is known as "The Pit of Despair"? For good reason too, many fandoms are choked with badfic. At least people like you turn the tide.