| Reviews for Okay |
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Dysgrammatophobia 4/5/10 . chapter 1How great. Really, it's beautiful. The only thing I'm curious about is I thought B wasn't in Wammy at the same time as the 4th gen kids. Ah well, creative liberties and all that (or I could just be wrong). Thanks for sharing. |
XbuttonsX 7/24/09 . chapter 1Not okay. Not mediocore. :D Spellbinding. Had me holding my breath. The way you work your words ... Just amazing. Awe-inspiring, really. Poor, small, thin Mello. He needs to bulk up on his chocolate. And not die. I don't want him to die either. Great job. :D |
Dlvvanzor 7/17/09 . chapter 1I'm very fond of the idea of Matt being skilled at watching everyone. :) |
Killingmemory 4/8/09 . chapter 1This was good. I especially loved the part about the Whammy kids' quiet days. Nice touch. |
Vera-Sama 4/3/09 . chapter 1A bit sad, if true. Loved it. |
Deus3xMachina 2/7/09 . chapter 1This is one of those vignettes that just makes your heart ache... but in a relatively good way, I suppose. Very nicely written. |
black laurel 2/4/09 . chapter 1That was...deep. Loved the part with B. Left me thinking, this one did... |
RichelleShalark 2/3/09 . chapter 1I feel really dumb (maybe I just haven't gotten enough sleep) but could you possibly explain what's going on? XP I fail at life, seriously. :( |
Free of Mundane Thoughts 2/1/09 . chapter 1And yay! Now for the review! Obviously, utter adorableness in many various ways, (XD) and yay for Matty being observant and happyful and YAY! ... ... *spazzes* -Amazing how much that happens, ain't it? and YARGH for comp keys not liking me! They always fall off... *sniff sniff* |
SapphireMistress 1/31/09 . chapter 1wow...that waas great! nO other comment but that... ME GIVE YOU LOADS OF REVIEW COOKIES FOR ZAT! |
SkywardShadow 1/31/09 . chapter 1So sad. And so excellent. Awesome work, as always. |
ellan54 1/31/09 . chapter 1im kinda confused...matt doesnt know his surroundings because of his video games yet he notices peoples' actions? it's a little angsty. but they are orphans so they should think about life once in a while. have you seen the movie L change the world? it tell a little about Near. |
Gabriela Romero 1/31/09 . chapter 1Hey I liked this, although for a while I had to sit and ponder what it was really about. But it becomes clear at the end. Impeccable writing, good job. |