WHAT THE...

it was a very well written story. but what was in the letter?

loved it. so dramatic. more!

that was great

You're on to a good start with this story, I really hope you decide to continue and update. It was pretty dramatic and your writing kept me wanting more, to find out what would happen, it was captivating.

Great job and I look forward to reading more,

M

good chapter write more

PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS FOR THIS

this story is looking awesome..can i tell you one thing?

You should really be thankful of having alot of reviewers and readers n one just ONE chapter you have 15 reviews..you know how long it took me just to get like 8 or 9? you are seriously famous on fan fiction lol keep going on with your stories and please upload Dear Diary

OMG I love it.

More PLEASE!

Depressing for sure, but I liked it.

Good writing you did, cant wait for an update

OH MY GOSH! It's only one chapter and it's already amazing, it even made me depressed. Which is unusual, since it's the first chapter and all. Trust me dude, if you can put so much emotion into this one chapter, you should definitely continue this. It's rockin' I love it I love it I love it. It's absolutely, positively, tee-totally amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon.

Lots of Love

Rocker-Chick-12345

A.K.A. Brittany

oh man... this is really good so far, i really liked how descriptive you were about everything, from feelings to events. it all seems quite real, you didn't skip over anything. this chapter was really great!

OMG THANK YOU IT'S NOT DONE YET! I CRIED! OH GOD POOR NATE! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE TELL ME IT'LL ALL WORKOUT! GOD THIS IS HORRIBLY SAD... BUT SO WELL WRITTEN! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE UPDATE BEFORE I DIE!

this is the best. update. now. please. its my fate for you to update this story.