I'm just about dying for you to continue this, although I don't know whether you had plans to or not. I think it's wonderful.

please continue<3 :)

WHY WOULD YOU END IT THERE! Write more, now! I demand it!

My God... I love this already, and it's just started. You did a beautiful job on it, and you better finish it! (Three chapters, right?) I look forward to the rest. Write, woman!

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This fic is really emotional. It's really deep and I'm probably going to cry before it's finished. But that's okay. I also think it's cool how you combined the magic of the games with actual medical stuff. That took some skill to figure out how to do it and make it still seem realistic for the most part. The only thing I really have any questions on at the moment is how Roxas got AIDS in the first place? I mean, he's just so young, and there are actually more ways of getting AIDS then people realize. Not only can it be sexually transmitted, but if you share needles or come into contact with bodily fluids such as blood. I think you're doing a good job with keeping the characters in character also. Even Larxene, who I usually wouldn't see as a nurse, keeps her bitchy personality. Of course, I still love her that way. Love to you for the story. I'll be looking forward to seeing how you finish it. Bye.

This is going to end badly, isn't it? *sigh* I hate it when good fics are sad...

It is good though. Finish it soon. You can forget your other stories for a little bit just to finish up this one. xD

It just better not make me cry. T_T

don't give up Roxas! *determined face* Please update again soon!

Wow, what a great start! Axel's working at the hospital. Are you even allowed to these kind of professions with tattoos?

Poor Roxas, no visitors...I wonder what happened to his family or friends, if he had any. Why wouldn't they be visiting? It's no wonder why Roxas doesn't feel like living. What's there to live for right?
But I'm glad Axel didn't give up on him. Come on Axel, you can do it!

Nice summary, it really caught my attention. I'm really into romance stories that make me cry sometimes. (Yay to Romance and Tragedies *waves flag*) It's nice to read something that makes me flinch and choke on tears.
Yes, it's never a good idea to find the love of your life in the Terminal Care Unit. But it makes a great story =)
Keep up the great work. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Whoa. This story's pretty interesting. I really love it; I can't wait to read more...but I can already tell that it's gonna make my heart flinch a few times xD
Can't wait for more :]