Woah! Like, every chapter my jaw dropped farther and farther! I'm actually a major Tate fan. But this is like, really suspensful andi can't turn away! i actually think Ari is a major dirtbag... but still.

Read this entire story tonight. Great! I was disappointed though when I found out I found this story with one chapter left to go, lol. Keep up the good work.

I have a question. How is it Auntie Jen? I don't think that Ziva and Jenny are related.

That was a great chapter. I loved this story and am sad to see it ending, but at the same time I can't wait to see how it finishes!

i know a hundred people have probably told you this before but i'm truly sorry for your loss. I'm sure Garret was a good person. Again i'm sorry.

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER, UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

I really like this story. with the exception of you confusing homophones it is very well written.

to answer the question at the bottom, you cannot taste a rainbow while eating skittles because there is no blue skittle in the original bag. there isn't an idigo one either on that note.

you have a kid and you are 15? wow is it a boy or girl and how do you do it...and sorry if i aks to much:P love the story3

i dont think that your fanfic is stupid...i love it and think that it is one of the best fanfic i have read so dont stop just becaus some one say so

Aww, Caleb is going to get married! It seems so strange to read a chapter about Caleb when he's older, when you're so used to reading about him as a little kid...

Glad to see Caleb's all grown up now. It's sweet to see that he's getting married to Serena. Can't wait to see what the final chapter includes. Great job with this story :)

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Have fun, good story, fabulous, yata yata yata, i would elaborate but I'm on a time limit so...

:)

AW! That's great that they got together! So CUTE!

AW he's marrying Serena? AW

this story is really good... it's kinda sad that it's ending but it's good too. Good chapter and I hope you get well soon