F-f-f-f-f-f-fun-sized! XD!! ZOMFG THAT IS SO EFFING FUNNY.
CX!

Ohm this is hilarious. Update soon!

good stroy update soon

You need to work on keeping the characters, within their character. So, the characters need to act like themselves, not all like Kempachi and Ikkaku. Try watching a couple episodes with the characters to get how they act and then write the script accordingly to what the characters would ACTUALLY act like if put in the situation they are put in, and try keeping their speech patterns as well. You made Byakuya sound like a hick, Yamamoto a young acadamy student, and Mayuri seemed too much like a Kisuke/Zaraki hybrid.

Other than that, GOOD LUCK!

LOL! Nice *-^ i like the part where Isshin yells "WHY IS MY SON FUN-SIZED?!" Funny **!

update soon

AH, this is a nice and funny story and when are you going to post again? I am dying to see what happens next and Yeah it is awesomly funny!

kepp it up it is better than most that i have read and reviewed

hey i like it so far but there is one thing bothering me it is soi fon not soi fong

this ** is funny so far. can't wait for more hilariousness to ensue.

little confusing, but funny :P update soon

i suddenly feel pity for the mad scientist, but very coolies on the chapter

hehe lol this is hilarious please do something very very nasty to Mayuri (he kinda ** me off!) please keep writing cause ill b reading!!

you're finally back...I had to reread the story again to remember why I had this on story alert. Not much going on in this chapter so not really much to say about it. I hope you continue updating.
Oh and one thing, in the beginning when byakuya was talking, i think you meant to write "too" instead of "to". If you don't know, you use too when referring to something extra or an excessive amount of something.

Wow this is kinda funny i hope Ichigo goes threw some scary training. >:P and it would be funny if his hollow also shrunk XP