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INGENman
2009-09-06 . chapter 6
hello i am a big fan of your storys i have read 3,4, 14, 29, and 33. your woork is very good so is this story please update soon.

Chiyo- the first time they go to the pool where she keeps having drowning miss haps.

Ayumu- i love it when at the end of the series she tries to charge the good luck charm and her eyes go all funky.

Sakaki-when she goes to the cat alley and they attack her all at once.

To-mi-before they go into the school phycical and tomo gives yomi a hard time.

Kagura- when she walks chiyo to the store at night and scares her.

Kaori- whaen at the folk dance she dances with sakaki and then kimiura.

your work is on of the best i have read keep it up

p.s look for my storie when it comes.
DOGHERO1925
2009-08-03 . chapter 6
My favorite Kaorin moment was after she found the picture of Tomo sleeping with Sakaki. Funniest damn thing ever.
snowwygirl4
2009-05-09 . chapter 6
I really liked your story. The end of this chapter was quite a surprise. I also liked in the one of the parts they see yukari. Also when they see old friends, and when they are kicked off the tour bus. And also when they are at the hotel in NY and sakaki wakes up Tomo by saying something to do with police. I like it and can't wait for the next part.
mylilwashu
2009-03-12 . chapter 6
Very good story. Chiyo had her one moment to shine, even though it wasn't a pleasant one. Cant wait to see the next chapters ahead. San Antonio next, SA is my home town ^_^
Weener1
2009-03-12 . chapter 6
Oh my D8 Chiyo flipping shit AND the need for a steam cleaner~

What could possibly happen next!? D8

By the by, wht was Kagura doing on A Small World anyhow? XD Doesn't quite seem like her 'thing'.

Kaorin moment...EVERY TIME SHE GRACES THE SCREEN
VillainousHanacha
2009-03-11 . chapter 6
Well, a great chapter as usuall, very funny, very entertaining as usuall. The ending expecially,wasn't expecting that O_O . However, this is a personal gripe of mine. As a native New Yorker, I have a very strong distain of anything touristy. I mean, most people I know don't even like Times Square, myself included. Can you possibly put in things less touristy, like going to parks, bars (they're old enough), restaurants, or just plain old walking around the city? Show that America is more than just the Naked Cowboy, Disneyland and Presidential monuments? America is the most diverse nation on this planet, and I don't think you're really showing that. Just my opinion, I mean no disrespect.

Oh, by the way, my favorite Kaorin moment is when Tomo shows her pictures of the first visit to Chiyo's summer house. EPIC LULZ!

Oh, can they still go to New Orleans? Just an indulgent request on my part, but if it doesn't work into your story, don't change it for me. Your the author, not me. I just thought that New Orleans could be a really good chance for some seriously EPIC LULZ, just because it really is a party town.
Berlioz II
2009-03-11 . chapter 6
My favourite Kaori moment? All of them! What kind of a Kaori fan would I be if I even attempted to choose? Not to mention she appears so little that it all adds up to a single big character picture. Yeah, can't choose.

- Jani
AnimeCrazy195
2009-03-11 . chapter 5
Favorite Kagura moment:
Kagura first getting in Yukari's class and telling Sakaki she was her rival! Its funny that Sakaki didn't remember her! Hehe!
Hallwings
2009-03-11 . chapter 6
Yeah, I'd have to say that's my favorite Kaorin moment, too. The drive to Chiyo-chan's Summer Home in the third year.

Great chapter, BTW. I had a feeling that Chiyo-chan would snap sooner or later, considering how three of her friends act.

San Antonio, Texas...can't wait for that.
Supreme Kimchi
2009-03-01 . chapter 5
the Osaka and Bush exchange was classic. I literally fell off my chair.

As for my Kagura moment, well, you already said it.

"I like balls."
LMAO
Supreme Kimchi
2009-03-01 . chapter 4
GASP! You were the one who took away Naked Cowboy?! Shame on you! I met him personally and I thought he was a good guy even with the lack of clothes...

Anyway, Toyomi moment:
When Tomo kept bothering Yomi with "Chinsuko" or "Ukoncha"
Supreme Kimchi
2009-03-01 . chapter 3
that last bit with Patricia was funny.

Ooh, Sakaki moment, eh?
MY favorite would have to be her reaction when Yomi gave her bear soup lol.
Supreme Kimchi
2009-03-01 . chapter 2
oh man, the Osaka moment?! that is REALLY hard because she is my favorite Azugirl of all time.

I guess my fave moment would be when she got the hiccups! Or something else because that's only I can think from the top of my head.
Supreme Kimchi
2009-03-01 . chapter 1
a big fat lol to this story!

Let's see, fave Chiyo moment was when...
Mr. Tadakichi blew Chiyo away by tackling her after seeing Maya jump into Sakaki's arms.
AnimeCrazy195
2009-02-27 . chapter 4
They cause trouble everywhere don't they? HEHE!
Favorite Toyomi moment:
Yomi's bedroom scene. Though they argued mostly, I saw their closness with one another.
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