 ObsidianDaydream 2009-09-22 . chapter 1Hey me again <_<'. Had to review this lovely piece of writing just to say, I really love the way you write Kid. It's like you really understand the way his completely unhinged mind works...
uh...thats meant to be a compliment btw o.o |
 Loonalily 2009-08-07 . chapter 1Good ending line there. :D
Wow, living with Kid must be so stressful! |
 monkeybait 2009-05-28 . chapter 1That was great! Perfectly in character, everything. I'd love to say what my favorite line is, but I can't because every line was my favorite line. I'm just obsessed with how well done this was. I always wished that Square Enix would go out of their way to make some filler episode like this for Death the Kid and the twins, but alas, they never did. That craved me for now. Thank you! |
 Orchid Falls 2009-03-10 . chapter 1Again, your ending line just kills me.
You really are 'the' writer for these three for me. Your balance of humour is spot on and your creativity is incredible. You manage to take characters that I find so hard to write and make it look so effortless, bringing their craziness to life on the screen. Really amazing job as always. |
 Quercus 2009-02-15 . chapter 1Your characterization of these three is just perfect! I love how you explore the everyday life of this team, coping with Kid's bizarreness and growing closer in ways other than battle. |
 estrela jem 2009-02-12 . chapter 1lmao! lol that was good! I loved it! Great job! |
 Fuzzy Eared 2009-02-08 . chapter 1LMAO, that was hilarious. :) |
 Marina Sanchez 2009-02-07 . chapter 1I love the end HAHAHAHAHA
ypu should continued, writte about the party, I don't know xD
But it's amazing :) |
 Phoenix Satori 2009-02-04 . chapter 1Glorious-fantastic-specatular-amazing-...tivity.
'Balancing act' --that's a perfect way to phrase how wonderfully you manage these characters. The way you've written the balance of their relationship is absolutely, breath-takingly beautiful, and it looks positively effortless. Kid would be seething with envy at the way you make this whole symmetry thing look so easy.
Seriously. I'm flabbergasted. This, and 'Eight Points on a Compass' (which are the only two pieces of fiction I've read thus far, but rest-assured I will be getting to the rest imminently), are almost disgustingly wonderful.
Everything--the characterization, the flow of the exposition, the fluidity of the conversation and the superlative manner you manage to capture PERFECTLY their individual voices (both introspectively as well as when they're dialoguing) is incredible.
Wow.
And that's all there is left to say, really. |
 ravyncat 2009-02-02 . chapter 1Muwahahaha.
(I know I cackle a lot in reviews...but it is because I enjoy your stories so much that I must laugh.)
I absolutely loved this story.
It was funny getting to see how Kid's mind works. Apparently he defaults to candles in moments of stress. *snicker*
I think he's also correct in thinking Patti just ignores the things she wants to. LOL at the space bubble.
I'm thinking living with cute and gorgeous is shorting out his brain. xD
The hints of how very much he likes Liz--especially in the dress--were awesome. And the last line was perfect.
This made my Liz/Kid/Patti shipping inner fangirl dance with glee. ^^
Loved it. |
 Anti-Logic 2009-02-01 . chapter 1Very fun. Kid is turned on by the weirdest things, but we knew that already. |
 N o L L i 3 2009-02-01 . chapter 1Hahaha, this story fits the Kid-trio PERFECTLY. I just love how Kid-kun reacted to the dress. SO FUNNY. |
 Anzer'ke 2009-02-01 . chapter 1HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Awesome stuff dude(ette?) |
 Pippin's Socks 2009-02-01 . chapter 1Loved it :D Especially the last line xD All your soul eater works are completely perfect! Keep up the amazing work :D |
 Patka91 2009-02-01 . chapter 1That was so good :D It always puts me in a good mood when you add new stories :)
And I was wandering... Will you write, somewhere in the future, a story where Kid and girls are older? Because I'm really curious about how you'd describe them (because you seem to never fail to make them in-character). So, yeah... just being curious :) |