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Reviews for: Symmetry is Relative
ObsidianDaydream
2009-09-22 . chapter 1
Hey me again <_<'. Had to review this lovely piece of writing just to say, I really love the way you write Kid. It's like you really understand the way his completely unhinged mind works...

uh...thats meant to be a compliment btw o.o
Loonalily
2009-08-07 . chapter 1
Good ending line there. :D
Wow, living with Kid must be so stressful!
monkeybait
2009-05-28 . chapter 1
That was great! Perfectly in character, everything. I'd love to say what my favorite line is, but I can't because every line was my favorite line. I'm just obsessed with how well done this was. I always wished that Square Enix would go out of their way to make some filler episode like this for Death the Kid and the twins, but alas, they never did. That craved me for now. Thank you!
Orchid Falls
2009-03-10 . chapter 1
Again, your ending line just kills me.

You really are 'the' writer for these three for me. Your balance of humour is spot on and your creativity is incredible. You manage to take characters that I find so hard to write and make it look so effortless, bringing their craziness to life on the screen. Really amazing job as always.
Quercus
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
Your characterization of these three is just perfect! I love how you explore the everyday life of this team, coping with Kid's bizarreness and growing closer in ways other than battle.
estrela jem
2009-02-12 . chapter 1
lmao! lol that was good! I loved it! Great job!
Fuzzy Eared
2009-02-08 . chapter 1
LMAO, that was hilarious. :)
Marina Sanchez
2009-02-07 . chapter 1
I love the end HAHAHAHAHA
ypu should continued, writte about the party, I don't know xD
But it's amazing :)
Phoenix Satori
2009-02-04 . chapter 1
Glorious-fantastic-specatular-amazing-...tivity.

'Balancing act' --that's a perfect way to phrase how wonderfully you manage these characters. The way you've written the balance of their relationship is absolutely, breath-takingly beautiful, and it looks positively effortless. Kid would be seething with envy at the way you make this whole symmetry thing look so easy.

Seriously. I'm flabbergasted. This, and 'Eight Points on a Compass' (which are the only two pieces of fiction I've read thus far, but rest-assured I will be getting to the rest imminently), are almost disgustingly wonderful.

Everything--the characterization, the flow of the exposition, the fluidity of the conversation and the superlative manner you manage to capture PERFECTLY their individual voices (both introspectively as well as when they're dialoguing) is incredible.

Wow.

And that's all there is left to say, really.
ravyncat
2009-02-02 . chapter 1
Muwahahaha.

(I know I cackle a lot in reviews...but it is because I enjoy your stories so much that I must laugh.)

I absolutely loved this story.

It was funny getting to see how Kid's mind works. Apparently he defaults to candles in moments of stress. *snicker*
I think he's also correct in thinking Patti just ignores the things she wants to. LOL at the space bubble.

I'm thinking living with cute and gorgeous is shorting out his brain. xD

The hints of how very much he likes Liz--especially in the dress--were awesome. And the last line was perfect.

This made my Liz/Kid/Patti shipping inner fangirl dance with glee. ^^
Loved it.
Anti-Logic
2009-02-01 . chapter 1
Very fun. Kid is turned on by the weirdest things, but we knew that already.
N o L L i 3
2009-02-01 . chapter 1
Hahaha, this story fits the Kid-trio PERFECTLY. I just love how Kid-kun reacted to the dress. SO FUNNY.
Anzer'ke
2009-02-01 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Awesome stuff dude(ette?)
Pippin's Socks
2009-02-01 . chapter 1
Loved it :D Especially the last line xD All your soul eater works are completely perfect! Keep up the amazing work :D
Patka91
2009-02-01 . chapter 1
That was so good :D It always puts me in a good mood when you add new stories :)
And I was wandering... Will you write, somewhere in the future, a story where Kid and girls are older? Because I'm really curious about how you'd describe them (because you seem to never fail to make them in-character). So, yeah... just being curious :)
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