Pretty good. You got all the character down pretty good, but it would have been nice to see some bantering between Riggs and Murtaw like in the movies and Riggs didn't seem quite crazy enough. All in all, not bad.

I liked those last few lines. Word.lol

D-ude, this was too awesome for words! Lethal Weapon and Supernatural!? That's is made of so much win, and awesome (yet again). You really managed to make both mediums work together perfectly without a hint of "disbelief", if you get my meaning. You got the characters down perfectly, right down to Roger's stammer manersim and Riggs' tendacy insult with a loaded weapon.



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Sakura123

Like i said you did an awesome job on this crossover :D Riggs and Dean together? now that spells trouble hehe.

*He clamped his mouth shut, resorting to a pained grunt as his back rubbed on the material of his Dad’s shirt buttons. “I gotcha, dude,” the older hunter tried to soothe, squeezing him suspiciously like a hug.* Sniff Sniff i love that.

“Sorry, honey. You’re a little young for my tastes. Now Daddy?” She raised a single finger to her jaw, in consideration. “Him I’d do.” Well hell yeah!! lol ok sorry just couldnt help myself lol.

Looking muchly to the brotherhood fic of yours, so hurry LOL

Mum 0x0x0

*flails*.. I didn't get the alert on this one! GR

Well, thanks to my snoopiness, I'm here at last and so glad to have found it!

Loved it. Such fantastic Dean-whump, and Mason, and the henchmen and Riggs and Murtaugh (sp?) as they swoop into the rescue. But you really had me at SURPRISE when Roge took one and I flailed and snapped forward in my seat with a WTF look. Great twist for it to have been Mason aka shapeshifter.

BRAVO! Great read!

Okay SQUEA! Omg that was awesome! i loved lethal weapon and supernatural~~ gahh so good! :)

this is great!

What a lot of fun - great hurt Dean, and cool take on Lethal Weapon - Mel before weirdness. Loved it.

Phoebe

I enjoyed reading your story.
Thanks for sharing it with us.

OMG, I was so excited to read this story. It's been KILLING me to wait all day. As soon as you sent me the email I squeeled and clapped and my curiousity was on fire.

As soon as I saw this line:

"It hurt a fucking lot..."

I knew I was in for a treat. I'm gonna just give you my play-by-play reactions.

-- His feet are bare?? OMG...

-- "...every time he was forced back under the house in something that resembled a little too much of a coffin..." Heh.

-- Oh, wow! He's 16!! I know you said pre-series, but I completely skipped over that... Hee. Okay, so now I'm trying to picture Brock going through this...

-- The rats thing is starting to get very cool. Like... the reason' Indy hates snakes dating back to his childhood. Dean hating rats? Totally defined...

--"... and then the pain would come. He wasn’t ready for it, not so soon …" Aw!

-“Fu…ck you.” It was worth every breath it stole. He could help it. ATTA BOY!

-- Shaking Dean... whimper...

--"...Dean noticed Sink coming forward, the cup in one hand..." Oh, God. I'm worried. And what does this shape shifter beeyotch want with Sammy?!

-- God, you're really putting it to him in this!

-- “Him I’d do.” Hee. You're mum loved that line, I bet.

(sorry... I'm reading)

-- “Kid?” OMG, I actually whimpered out loud. Hee.

-- "tingling with sensation that felt just as good as it did bad" That is an awesome description!

-- “Come on, kid. I promised your little brother I was bringing you home.” AWW! I'm seriously all smushy here! I love me a big damn hero.

-- "...Now a little less conversation and a little more getting the fuck out of here..." HAHAHAH! I love it!!

-- “Bad guys?” Okay, I love that Dean calls them that. It's so Riggs. I mean, seriously.

-- "This guy was a detective? Okay so not a hunter." I love that Dean's first instinct was 'hunter' and not 'cop.' I wouldn't have thought of that. NICE.

-- Riggs kicking ass just... kicks ass!

-- OMFG! You shot me! I mean Rodge!

-- OMFG again! NICELY done with the shapeshifter!

-- "“I gotcha, dude,” the older hunter tried to soothe, squeezing him suspiciously like a hug. *sniff* I'm gonna cry...

-- "…even scarier? Dean wasn’t sure he would put up that much of a fight..." I love it. Sick, I know, but I love it.

So very much WORD, my friend. This was fantastic. Wonderfully fantastic. A wonderful, wonderful birthday present.

Cool story.

Weird to see those two worlds colide together but it fits well. :)

Great story! I think you pulled it off very well. Suprised that nobody was "Getting too old for this" LOL. Loved how you had Leo providing distraction, which he his speciality! Excellent story!

Awesome job, hon. I think you did Riggs and Murtaugh just fine. I'd like to see you do Leo sometime. LOL

Great fic, really great. Liked it a lot. :)

Mel Gibson & Jensen Ackles on the same screen...hm, yeah, I can see that ^_^ This was really amusing, liked it alot!

That was really clever-- nice way to cross over and lots of hurt dean

Tidia

Okay, so here it is, 2.45am and I can't sleep thanks to the heat. LOL Figured I'd drop by and just state once again how much I love this fic, mate. Seriously love it. The way you describe Dean as he was hanging had the sick, twisted hurt addict in me drooling and I only wish I could do that scene the same justice.

You shocked me with shooting Rodge, you had me smiling with John's "squeeze" that was suspiciously like a hug. LOL And the ending was simply awesome. I was grinning like a loon, totally picturing it. LOL

So all that stress was worth it, my friend. Cause this was so much fun to read and I'll love reading it again and again too.

*HUGS*