Love it already!

-Nancy

Oh I loved it! And a cute little appearance by Oliver at the end. AMAZING way to end it, it tied everything together, and the way the last couple of lines were was great. I really liked this and as I've told you time and again you are FANTASTIC at capturing these characters. I hope to see more from you soon. Truly amazing work. Awesome! My hat is off to you mate!

Katarina Sparrow 19

ROTFL! Oh my God Toby is gonna get it "where you been 'idin Dodge? Course it would've 'urt!" Haha, I liked that quote that was sweet. And I love the little bit with Dodger at the end, course I adore that character so ya know...BUT A CLIFFHANGER? Oh you are so very mean to cliff it again. Regardless a wonderful chapter, hope to see an update soon. Once again grand work, simply grand.

Hahaha. I told you so! Hahaha, that's amazing. I didn't think Fagin'd come right out and say it, oh that's just the best. You're really a fantastic author you know that. Oh boy this has brightened up my morning, and Fagin chewin Bill out, oh so classic! I loved this, truly seriously loved it and can't WAIT to see how you're gonna end this thing, although I will be sad to see it's close. *pouty face* either way, another fantastic chapter, brilliant as always.

Oh no it was brilliant I loved it! And your stories put me on such a rollercoaster. Me mom comes in to find out why I'm laughing...I tell her your first letter, then she pops back in to find me crying, I tell her about the Dodge thing, and now she's popped back in again to find me in hysterical laughter. She keeps asking me how my head feels. Hahaha. But honestly this was FANTASTIC! I absolutely loved it, especially Nancy's response to Bill's plea about not telling anybody. And Fang being the one to judge *grin* that just about saved Bill's sorry butt I suppose. AWESOME CHAPTER! Plot? Oh I'd love to see Fagin in an 'I told you so' kind of deal. Seriously though, awesome chapter.

The excitement drives me nuts! Seriously! PLEASE continue, soon!

AWESOME! That's fantastic stuff that is. Bill was caught. Her Bill. That would be all Nancy would manage to even think at that point. And I LOVED the way you painted Toby, brilliant work. Awesomely amazingly brilliant work! Please update soon. This is FANTASTIC!

*squeal!* I was just about to thank you for the amazing Dodge and Nancy fluff and here you did it on purpose. THANKS! Hehe you're the very best and I can't wait for the next chapter. *grins ear to ear* update soon, awesome work as always.

Goodness... PLEASE don't stop now! )

Haha, you creeped me out writing that too. *shudders violently* I do enjoy those dream sequences, and so much how you managed to make Bill Sykes so some honest to God emotion in this, I was beginning to wonder if he was human at all. Hehehe. Anyways, I really do have to go now but another fantastic chapter! Hopefully we see more about the other characters besides sykes soon, I'm starting to miss them. Hehe, but regardless your story is amazing. LOVE IT!

Flame? How could I flame, when this is so MAGNIFICENT! An update, first off yay! I loved the last sentence, and the thing with Fagin's words buzzing in his head. Well played, extremely well played. I loved it, don't leave me hangin though, update soon oh virtual Fagin buddy of mine! :-)

*rolls eyes* oh yes I love cliffs, not! Grr, who is he? the police officer maybe? Oh c'mon update soon this is hardly fair. But, I loved the chapter, Bill scared of Fagin, rotfl! Grand work, just grand.

To the clink, to the clink! (she chants). Anyways, I'd hate to see Billy boy in the clink but that'd make an awesome plot line. I says go for it, hecks yes! *shrug* you're the author it's all your choice, awesome chapter! they always are of course, this was superb, and I love the way you did Mr. Crackit! Grand grand grand! awesome!

Oh... what's going to happen next? 8-O Can't wait to continue reading the next chapter when it's up! )

Umm, not too good with british money, but five pounds? (i think that was pounds) what an outrage for a thief of Bill Sike's calibre. Of course I jest, this was a FANTASTIC chapter, and a very fantastic update! You seem to have a very solid plot flow going now, oh this is grand. I LOVED IT! Great great great work, oh this brightened up my evening! Bravo!