|Reviews for She Holds The Key|
| redguitar 4/23/10 . chapter 1
ahh i loved this! i read the other one too and it was also great. the whole master bedroom and lindsey conversations were really good and funny. definetly keep writing about these two!
| Mrs.Cullen21 7/6/09 . chapter 1
This was adorable. I loved it. Good job.
| cherrygurl1225 4/27/09 . chapter 1
Aw, that was so cute, Marissa! I don't watch OTH, but I saw your link on the forum and wanted to review a few of your stories.
I love this one cuz Lucas & Peyton have a baby girl and the relationship Peyton has with her daughter is just so strong already. You did a really good job of portraying the mother-daughter relationship as well as the boyfriend/girlfriend dynamic.
Ever since I started writing my Tru/Jack stories revolving around pregnancy, I've become such a sucker for baby stories. What a sap I am! I love this one! SO CUTE!
Keep up the great writing and your grammar/spelling is pretty good, too! I only see a few errors, but nothing major. :)
I'm so glad you have an account now! *adds you to favs list*
| blastmbs 4/2/09 . chapter 1
aw how sweet!
| BadRomance21 3/17/09 . chapter 1
I loved it! it was really great!
| AML15 2/8/09 . chapter 1
This was SO cute!
| BrownEyedCynic 2/2/09 . chapter 1
I loved it, it was too cute...
| desrm 2/2/09 . chapter 1
So adorable. I am a complete sucker for anything with LP babies lately, so I really loved this. I had to chuckle at Peyton still teasing Lucas about the master bedroom, haha. Great job and keep writing!
| laj33 2/1/09 . chapter 1
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| cathedrals 2/1/09 . chapter 1
that was really cute.
| kylielink 2/1/09 . chapter 1
| lukenpeyton-puckleberry-4ever 2/1/09 . chapter 1
i thought it was adorable