ahh i loved this! i read the other one too and it was also great. the whole master bedroom and lindsey conversations were really good and funny. definetly keep writing about these two!

This was adorable. I loved it. Good job.

Aw, that was so cute, Marissa! I don't watch OTH, but I saw your link on the forum and wanted to review a few of your stories.

I love this one cuz Lucas & Peyton have a baby girl and the relationship Peyton has with her daughter is just so strong already. You did a really good job of portraying the mother-daughter relationship as well as the boyfriend/girlfriend dynamic.

Ever since I started writing my Tru/Jack stories revolving around pregnancy, I've become such a sucker for baby stories. What a sap I am! I love this one! SO CUTE!

Keep up the great writing and your grammar/spelling is pretty good, too! I only see a few errors, but nothing major. :)

I'm so glad you have an account now! *adds you to favs list*

aw how sweet!

I loved it! it was really great!

This was SO cute!

I loved it, it was too cute...

So adorable. I am a complete sucker for anything with LP babies lately, so I really loved this. I had to chuckle at Peyton still teasing Lucas about the master bedroom, haha. Great job and keep writing!

So cute!

very cute,

that was really cute.

liked it.

i thought it was adorable