It was a spur of the moment decision to click on "Phil of the Future" in the TV Show catagorie, but I'm glad I did. I really loved reading this and hope to read more. You did a great job keeping them in character and it was very well written!

Ah! I was wondering when you'd come back, and you have no idea how happy you've made me! I wish this place wasn't so dead but at least I know a couple of writers (you and craftynotepad) that are always lingering. I love sweet one-shots like these and normally I don't like song fics but this one was very well done and the song actually connects to the story; it isn't random like a lot of people tend to do.

Wow I would love to read more stories from you. You really know how to draw the reader in with your words.

This is really amazing.. very detailed and sweet.. it grasps the concept of true love :) I love this fanfic

okaie,

Such crisp, clean, romantic storytelling, your impressive writing causes us to want to go wherever you're inclined to transport us to. Myself? I have a sudden hankering for rainy days and banana pancakes. I loved the way you teased us with Keely's waning willpower; you're always an impressive wordsmith: tantalize, whimpers, faltering, pitter-patter, mesmerized, alluringly, dreariness, sanctuary, ... I LOVE IT!

My absolutely favorite lines: "A hand catches her bare arm, holding it softly, forcing her to stop as she feels the familiar sparks that always ignite," "His finger traces hearts into her soft skin." As much as I adore dialogue, this imagery makes me FEEL the story.

Nice to find out Phil's handy in the kitchen; appears to be the way to a woman's heart as well. ;)

Best
CraftyNotepad
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P.S. Agreed. Yea! Phil's coming back on this month! AT LAST THERE IS MORE "PHIL IN OUR FUTURE!" Now, please, if you'll be so kind as to excuse me, I have a craving for banana flapjacks and a delightfully slow rise.

Aw, that was absolutely adorable. :D

Aw. Nice to see you're back.

When you get around to the ideas I gave you for stories, let me know, kay?