| Reviews for Pain in the heart |
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JeanBeckett 9/16/11 . chapter 6Hello, I just finished your story and I really love it. I hope there'll be an update soon. I'm really impatient to know what is going to happen. This is a great story. Have a good day. |
Anigen 1/16/10 . chapter 6yay luke is mina's mate |
Lady Khazaroth Mur 5/10/09 . chapter 6YAY GORE! *ahem* Some very nice ideas in here, especialy the whole thing about mates and Zeus. Keep it up! |
1Angel Fallen 3/15/09 . chapter 5another great update. Poor luke. I hope they find mina soon. I cant wait for more |
hidingthetruthbehindamask 3/15/09 . chapter 5another amazing chapter you are just fab at writing to you know that can't wait for the next chapter if you have time read my twilight/demon cross-over story Bella and Luke's Love Story thanks and keep up the fab work |
hidingthetruthbehindamask 3/13/09 . chapter 2amazing I love your story and I love Demons please if you have five read my story Bella and Luke's Love Story a twilight/Demons cross-over thanks and keep up the good work |
1Angel Fallen 2/17/09 . chapter 4Great Update. I cant wait for the next chapter |
Hallow Avengence 2/16/09 . chapter 4This is great, really IC! Only point - you might want to proof read it, there are quite a few spelling and punctuation mistakes, but still good. XD |
calathiel94 2/8/09 . chapter 3Nice update, can't wait for the next! |
EnglishFitzPercy 2/8/09 . chapter 3Yay! Another great chapter, please keep them coming :) |
1Angel Fallen 2/8/09 . chapter 3I want to know who has Mina and how they know that she a vampire? Great third chapter. Poor luke feeling gulity. I cant wait for more |
1Angel Fallen 2/4/09 . chapter 2Great second chapter. you have me intrigued. i hope you update soon |
EnglishFitzPercy 2/4/09 . chapter 2Awesome chapter, keep it up! |
calathiel94 2/3/09 . chapter 2Nice update, looking forward to the next! Have you considered getting a beta to look over this? Again, nice work ] |
calathiel94 2/3/09 . chapter 1Interesting start, please update soon! |