jsnsnananahaajaba ULTIMATE ANGST PAIRING WHYYYYYYY

Gosh this is depressing.

why would you do that to my feelings? this is so angsty I can't live with it now. My eyes are all hot and wet and I don't know what to do with the tears. Growing up sucks. I'd never leave Neverland, and I'm since very little wondering why did they leave there. Such a nice place! Oh my poor Peter. This broke my heart. You have the sweetest writing, my dear. Thanks very much for this story.

Angsty! Though u kinda make Wendy a bitch. I really wanted 2 slap her. (I SO would've gone w/ Peter. Sorry fam, Peter's my 4ever;)) Love the story. Nice written. I hope 2 read more of ur work soon(:

Peter Pan was my favorite since I saw the movie for the first time. I watched it everyday I wasn't in school according to my mother. Now I love him even more because a symbol of both the innocence and hopeless we lose and start to realize in life.

Fortunately and unfortunately we are all Wendys who have to say good bye. Honestly their relationship is completely bittersweet when done realistically as JM Barrie did, but your story ripped a hole in my heart and made me tear up because of how well you wrote about the despair and grief the destruction of this relationship is. You captured the emotions of these events so accurately, it's beautiful.

I was loving your Life With Derek stories (some more than others due to OOC-ness) and I'm so glad I came upon this. Writing that plucks the strings of one's heart is forever a joy. Keep it up!

I can't

I just

all the angst and she has to grow up

she'll always be his wendy. I'm tearing up. asldkfj.

ultimate angst pairing, indeed. lovely.

Yes.
My love hate couple.
Such angst.

beautiful, and very sad.

This just rips my heart apart.

Beautifully done.

Wow, this was really quite good. Not exactly like the book's ending, but still good. My favourite part of this was the ending, the little bit about her having once drawn herself with wings and the reference to the "old wound" that will always be there, buried deep under everything as Wendy continues to grow. Thank you for sharing this!

This was absolutely lovely and heartbreaking. It was rec'd on LJ, and deservedly so. You breathed such life into Wendy, and Peter as well. Off to read more of your stuff!

OMG! This is heartbreaking but oh so very, very good. Words cannot describe how much I loved this story! It is so very sad but just what you would expect from the continued story. The ending was painfully beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing this! *off to read everything else you've written*

"He doesn't say anything to that. But when his hand comes up to his face—she realizes that he might be crying. Hot, angry tears; a child's tears. Something within her crumbles, and she lets out a long, tired sigh, then turns him around by his shoulders and presses his face to her neck, and wraps his arms about him. Tinkerbelle flits away quietly, subdued. Peter trembles, and abruptly clutches at her so tightly her ribs begin to sore, and doesn't let go for a very long time."

This whole story was lovely; saw it recc'd on livejournal and I couldn't agree more with the reccer passing it on. :)

Oh this was wondrous. Normally I try to offer some constructive criticism but there is nothing for me to criticize.

Oh gosh. This is so, so sad. I don't even know what to say. Poor Wendy. Poor Peter. Poor Nana. :( I could really feel the current of emotion in this piece, it was lovely.