update soon

Good start! Hoping to see more soon.

Interesting

You know how much I like your writing. You have to write some more of this! Don't give up! We love you! ;P Love K. x

Quite intriguing beginning...I am looking forward to more. I like your writing style. It is a pleasure to read.

I'm interested to see where this is headed... I always enjoy a good Snape/Harry story. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

Good story so far, please update soon, thank you

it was a good chaptetr thank you

Great start! I look forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for writing and keep up the great work!

Interesting beginning.

Amber

Yet another promising story - I hope you plan to continue this one! I'm curious as to where it's going. :-)

Interesting. I liked the nod to canon by having Snape mention flesh-eating slugs like Hagrid did.

Can't wait to see where this goes!

You're expressive use of language is admirable, and the story captivating. It will be very interesting to see which character you choose to showcase, Professor Snape or Harry, and how the story unofolds.

Happy Writing!

Loved it! Pure Snape in all his glory rescuing Harry once again. Great writing, very exciting. I'm glad to see a new story like this emerging. So many of the new ones are so poorly written that it's a real treat to find one like this. Can't wait for more!

Great chapter!