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CarmillaD
2009-08-03 . chapter 1
AAww, what a shame you haven't updated this story, because the introduction is really good! I hope you upload a new chapter soon
iluvduncan2323
2009-06-19 . chapter 1
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Shinjiru Kokoro
2009-05-19 . chapter 1
Yes!

Okay, first off, I know it's totally hypocritical of me to be enouraging your continuation of this when I haven't touched my own story in six months... but really? This is unique and already unbelievably well-written! You've already dabbled in the character development and made prominent the directions in which this story could go. I. Love. It.

And speaking of stories... -coughs- ...I will be getting back to mine very soon! Things have just happened. I mean, sometimes life spits on you, and it has really good aim. Anyways, I'm raring to get things in motion once again, and I implore you to keep going with this one.

What can make the summer better than a story about summer? You are a genius. Seriously.

-Kat
BurgandyBangs
2009-04-03 . chapter 1
i (obviously) read your intro and even if it was forced, it was good. i really like it and hope you do up date soon. Please. For me?! even though you dont know me you can still up date for me.
shinu_91@hotmail.com
2009-02-13 . chapter 1
Well, if this is how you write when your feeling forced I can't wait to read a chapter you're actually content with. The prologue got me hooked and I will be looking forward to the next chapter.

btw, what does STDs mean?
Juleskat101
2009-02-07 . chapter 1
itt's kute! ^^ update soon plz! (and this is when there was nosuch thing as tdi, right?)
citgirl
2009-02-06 . chapter 1
cool
Lorra
2009-02-05 . chapter 1
I haven't watched Total Drama Island, but I'm intrigued by your "forced prologue"!
Emerald Divinity
2009-02-02 . chapter 1
Hey, it doesn't seem forced! You've incorporated a lot of what people love about TDI: The camp (which has changed), the characters (nice interactions by the way!), the personalities, etc.

I can't wait for longer chapters to read. I liked the prologue, which has got my interest piqued.

Some questions I have that will probably be answered along the ay of the story is... Who's an actual Wawankwa resident or a visitor/vacationer? (Will Chris actually be involved in this? Mostly likely not since it is a romance fic, but you never know- it's the life of drama :)) All the TDI characters (or at least the one in this fic) aren't the same age right? (you said Beth was a graduate student, while Courtney and Bridgette seem to be juniors going seniors in high school; don't know about Duncan and Geoff.. and Katie)

Sorry this is long, but I can't wait to see what you come up with!
Intrigued Soul
2009-02-02 . chapter 1
This is absolutely amazing. The prologue doesn't seemed forced at all. Honestly, this is the most original idea I've seen for a TDI fanfic in a really long time. You shouldn't be too hard on yourself :D

Update soon!
tdipodsrule1
2009-02-02 . chapter 1
I really liked it. You should update soon.
marlynnknowsbest101
2009-02-02 . chapter 1
i cant wait to read the other chapters brah, it seems like it will be one beast story. dont forget to finish it.
mooseluver1995
2009-02-01 . chapter 1
love it
Blond with a brain
2009-02-01 . chapter 1
WRITE MORE!
Amethyst Ocean
2009-02-01 . chapter 1
Forced? Honestly? You've got to be KIDDING. O_O

This was absolutely amazing. You opened your story with great detail and certainly made it interesting from the start.

You should really give yourself more credit. Trust me, you deserve it. This prologue was simply brilliant. Overall, the originality of it truly makes me smile.

You did a great job, and I love it so far.
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