Wow, this is great. It really captures the akward feeling between Leoben and Kara. I love the hesitation both of them have towards each other. Great kissing scene by the way. So say we all!

Wow. This was just what I needed. What great writing, and characterization, and wham. Thanks!!

This is excellent! I wish it wasn't a single chapter!

...damn.

You do Battlestar, too? I'm in heaven.

I really enjoyed reading this. That scene on Earth was fantastic, and I have wanted to know for three weeks what was going through his head as he ran away from her remarking, "I was wrong."
You created really fantastic scenes in this, and the portrayal of the characters was excellent.

As always, I LOVE your writing. It's so beautiful, so poetic. I'm so deeply fond of this couple and when I saw that you had written a story for them I squealed - at work... 'blushes'

Thank you for allowing them a moment, and the resolution where they finally are equals rings so true.

Nic.