Needs more suspense, and more detail, but I understand you're all doing this just for fun.

I was thinking this could be a possible sequel to the game, but I don't know. I even planned on making a story of this sort of concept, but with some differences of course. Overall, I'm expecting a great story.

Still an excellent fic please write more kay?

dude this is pretty good made me laugh a couple of times you should write more

This was an amazing story so far. You said it won't be a oneshot, but I guess since nobody reviewed, it got turned into a oneshot, right? Well, I hope you will continue this fic, I sure would like to read more.