 koolkame 2009-02-07 . chapter 1Another excellent story from you! I was always wondering what's been happening with Ken in the show and this a great take on him. A lot of people say the show is superficial but they don't look deep enough like you did; Ben's "we have a mission" at the end of Max Out seemed odd to me (I actually thought that they knew that Max wasn't dead and they knew it, until Verdona's episode.) Really appreciate Max's last words to Ben in Voided now, didn't think of it at the time I watched and I liked the tie in to Race Against Time.
And I say AMEN to the fact that everybody in the Ben 10 universe should know about aliens at this point, it makes sense that Lance would know as well. Really liked this one, glad to have you on my Author Alert. |