Cute

Aw, I'm glad to see more written in regards to 'Bittersweet'. I think I have mentioned before of all the 'Dante has a kid' stories, this is by far one of the best ones I've read!

I really like these little one shots showing Vergil as the reluctant father. I can totally see him reacting the way he does to Dorian's actions. I also did enjoy the little glint that perhaps Vergil does find the child a bit endearing with the fact he reminds him of Dante when he was little, and the scene where Dorian doesn't like the beets. That was nice.

These little scenes are perfectly fine as separate one shots... but I almost feel that you could potentially incorporate them into the main story (Bittersweet). I can see them as flashbacks Vergil might have of when he first acquired Dorian.

Anyways, nice little scenes! Keep it up and I wait patiently for updates to 'Bittersweet'. :D

N.

cute, keep it up

I've often wondered if you were going to do a prequel to explain, Dorian's upbringing. I am glad that you have done this and so far it seems like Dorian is a little bit of a handful. I'd wager that Vergil didn't already have white hair Dorian would have been the cause of it.

However, I wanted to quickly point out something: In the 2nd snippet on this chapter, you wrote Damian instead of Dorian. meh... an honest mistake.

Anyways this has been light and fluffy, just how I like it. As always, you haave done an awesome job and please keep it up. I can't wait to see more from you, especially this and Bittersweet Symphony.