o my goodness this is brilliant. I was eating Chinese when I was reading this and I so very nearly choked on a mouthful of rice at Danny and the Obama poster..and the fleas...and Mac running off! Priceless! This is hilarious! Great work!

hahahahahaha i love that game! its really good so far!

OMG i laughed for so long i started crying and i dont cry when i laugh so that is a huge compliment

Yes, I did see the season finale. I hope no one else dies! Gosh, I don't want of the still-living characters to die because I like them all.

I really thought Stella and Mac were going to kiss. But they didn't and I started to give the T.V . a lecture and my mom thought I lost my marbles.

I hope you can update ASAP! What show are you in? Just curious.

Update ASAP and I'll be eagerly awaiting!

Autumn

i don"t think he has adhd. sq

great

Love this story. Really made me laugh! So thank you for making my day better :)

Btw, I don't think anyone else is going to die...at least that's what I've heard, so I'm keeping my fingers crossed that what I heard is true!

I thought it was an update then :( :P never mind as long as you update soon XD this fic makes me laugh until i cry i just re-read the 2 chapters myself to re-fresh my memory and i was lmao :)

That sucks that it was an anon reviewer :/ but at he/she they told you :) i don't see why people plagiarize either it's just a waste of time 'cause people won't like them any better for it, at least people know that it was you that came up with the idea :) what story was it maybe i've read it and can tell you the name of the author :)

OMG the frikkin season finale and the episode before that were ah-mazing (see what i did there hyphenated) :P in the greece episode i was at one point screaming for them to kiss :) but seriously Jess dying ;( that was the low point of the season. I don't think anybody else will die tbh, people will definitely stop watching :/ and TPTB won't want that :)

Can't wait for the actual update :P

Jen x

That should be:

.com

You've been plagiarized:

scarletnights.

scarletnights./2009/02/log-csi-new-york_

that was great! I pretty much fell over laughing reading this. Nice job! Please do another thing like this!

Yes, it was awful, I was deprived of fan fic for three days and had to write my own, it was really tough. I kind of sa around looking lost... So thanks for adding to this, it was very funny, very funny indeed. I'm laughng out loud, for some reason, it was the lins about Sid even wearing clothes (I kind of imagine maybe not, which scres me, and is also sort of interesting too, and that scares me even more...) and the line about Hawkes walking back and forth in T shirt and khaki shorts. Oh wow, Mac in jeans, Flack NOT in a suit, and the whole thing with Stella's hair, and Danny having to talk about it XD Love the game, and Danny's observation about Mac and Stella and the hurricane of flirting. Brilliant :D

YAY! This was just the thing to make me laugh after a day of school. I thought is was absolutly HILAROUS! I hope you update ASAP! I can't wait! Nice job! _

Please, write more NOW! :D

I was rolling on the floor laughing, seriously, this is so funny XD

Think I have to read it one more time *laughing so hard, im actually crying*

Ha, this was like the best ever! XD

Holy shit! that was HYSTERICAL!

i'm so excited to see what else you've got coming in this!