I have to admit, You do write really well and thought this was a rather cute sonadow. Thw song does express the mood really well. I hope you decide to write more sonadow ^^

Your summary doesn't really mention that Shadow is in the story (while I know the connotation of "lemon" I don't really know how the term "lime" is used), and I'm not into yaoi (preferring straight or yuri), but I'll admit that you write well. For a yaoi fic, this is okay. The song "What I've Done" by Linkin Park is a fairly good choice for this story, even if the lyrics invoke a somewhat depressed mood. If you ever feel like writing yuri, maybe I'll read some more of your stories. See ya... maybe.