Nice chapter, thank you!

Oh, be afraid Ryou, be very afraid! And Seto too, because Mokuba is so going to have his way :) (Seriously, I think some of Mokubas plotting will do them good.)

I'm very worried now: what will Carla do now that she knows that Seto cares about her 'rival'?

One thing that I found slightly out of character for Seto: calling his car a 'stupid piece of metal'. That man is in love with technology, I can't see him thinking such a thing, even when Carla is a pest.

This fic is sickeningly cute in a good way, and the tongue-in-cheek Mary Sue bashing is artistically done. Good job! (flashes you a thumbs up)

Update soon! ^_^

so good!! I loved it!! ^-^ Are Seto and Mokkie going to stay for dinner at Ryou's house? and what is Carla going to do know that she knows that Seto knows "Rei"? Update soon!

Great job Defiant Vixen. Carla just got served, go SETO!! Hope things get interesting. Update soon

Really cute and funny story. I'll admit that I usually only read yaoi, but I like your take on female versions of the characters in your stories. You don't give them some ridiculous and overcomplicated reason for hiding their gender and the reason's you do give actually make some sense. Not to mention the OC bashing is an infinite source of amusement for me as well. The female version of Ryou is absolutely adorable (and here I thinking Ryou couldn't get any cuter). Can't wait to see Seto's and Ryou's next meeting.

Hi!

Sorry I havent reviewed your story. Its been awhile since I'ves been on a computer. Its been very hectic.

OH your story is the best! Thank God Mokuba didnt fall for Carls's stunt, and Ryou told her off. Yay!

Now Ryou and Seto are going to have dinner. I think that little imp Mokuba, has some involvement with that.Hee Hee!

Please update soon! Its getting better!

Good luck!

Dreamcreator

Wow, I wonder if Carla's brain has ever been removed from its package. I doubt it though; she probably thinks it's a collectors item.xD More soon please!=3

ya know... I hate Carla so much that I like her now. Its just so funny to have a completely clueless failing Mary Sue like character

HA!GO ON SETO BEAT HER INTO TOMMOROW! Loved this capter. I can't wait to read more so update real soon, pwease!

Wow! Carla really knows how to drive someone up the wall, deliberately or not. Love Seto's smackdown of her and what happened with Ryou and the gang. By the way, I don't think I'd be up for the drinking game, purely do to the fact I'd be dead drunk after the first chapter. I might try it with another drink though. Please update soon!

I think this is a good chapter and I am looking forward to read the next chapter very very very much.

OMG! OMG! OMG!
I AM SO LOVING THIS!
IWANNA READ WHAT HAPPENS IN THE NEXT CHAPTER...XD
CARLA SO DESERVED THAT...XP
I LOVE SETO!
please update soon ^-^
CUZ I WANNA READ MORE...XD

I love this chapter. I really hate Carla so it made me happy

This was a spectacular chapter! I now have made my self hate Carla with a passion!

yay another great chapter!! cant wait to see what will happen next!