Hey honey,

and i got it right...about the length of the chapter! by the way as far as i know i clicked on Jack and Nina story, right now there is no mention of Nina

love ya x

Hey honey,

where the hell is Nina, she better be in next chapter! ur chapters are getting shorter with a new chapter i bet in 3rd it will be only few sentances.

Love ya x

Hey honey,

while reading your a/n i already understood that ur story would be a bit boring. i understand its a spoiler but u practically copied everything from season 2 day 1, i thought that fanfiction is about your imagination and you give us exactly what is in actual programme.
hope that Nina will be in next chapter.

Love ya x

Fantastic chapter as usual. Just reminding myself of Season 2! I love how you include CTU Chicago. Keep it up.

You feeling creative? Well, I'm glad. Fantastic (as usual, how many times can I say that?). UD soon.

Great start - I'm looking forward to seeing what you change to give Alex a bigger part. I always loved that moment, you just watch and think 'HE'S BACK'. =)