i luv it!!

Undoubtedly getting better, but..

did you realize that you called Emmett Emma?

Or sometimes when you should have said his you said her. :P

Just pointing that out :)

Great Chapter.

this is alsome

Hey good chapter. I think that Rosalie definately won't be surprised by what has happened as she seems to have an idea already.

Great Chapter x

Hi! Well done on this story. I really like the plot behind it.

love it
more plz

I still see problems with grammar and what not. Something like 'I call him' should be 'I'll call him'...

Yea, good job though for English as a second language.

may i ask, how long was her trasformation

they never thought of her, thats harsh

o update real soon please x

lol good a little fast paced but alls good. maybe make the chapters longer plz?
-lonewolf

Hey, your writing is really improving, I was actually quite surpirsed when I read this chapter, keep it up!

Well, that was really quick and unexpected ;-)
But I still like the story and can't wait till the Carlisle/Bella moments *g*