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aw this was a great storyy! I loved it!

This was an awesome story. Good job. :D Jasper, ah he's just so cool. :P

loved this story! Its got to be one of my fave alice/jasper stories

Aw, I love this fanfic! I wish that Jasper could beat James up even more though, lol.

AW! That was SO AMAZING! I LOVE ALL OF IT! Ha! Lily was a smart baby (she liked Jasper...). That, in my mind, is the definition of a smart kid. Really nice work! Keep it up!

Best Wishes,

ME LOVEY JAZZY

Loved this story! :) Now I'm sad it's over. :(

... I cried

The plot was utterly fabulous

You should get a Beta though because then it would be a coherent masterpeice!

I LOVED it though!

The birthday party was so sweet, Jasper being all fatherly and such *sniffles*

Wonderful story!

i loved it!

love it!

Why I like the Jonas Brothers

They are so cute, but my favorite is Nick. I love their song burning up I swear they wrote it for me. These boys can do it all sing and act. I saw Camp Rock like a 100 times…

haha. so i know most of the songs that get popular because of little fan girls aren't great, but they really do have some good music no one but mature fans listens too :) i'm a jonas fan and really, i don't think nick's that cute. i like them because i think they're good people, which they really are. oh yeah, and i really don't like camp rock at all lol

haha that was long sorry :) okay i'm going to read more!

Great job!

I swear I'm going to start crying, not just because this was a beautiful ending to a beautiful story but because it was a fabulous story and now it's ended. I absolutly adore this story and your style of writting, it's so amazingly awsome and your idea was really original and it wasn't to hard to read... as in I could come home from a day at the slave grind (also known as school (see under torcher and prison)) to read your wonderfully story... :'(

I was very happy with how the story ended, and how it flowed, I'm just gonna miss it :(

Anyway good luck and keep up the hard work.

Aw, sweet! What's with Dylan's name? Also, will Lily ever find out about James? I can picture a sixteen-year-old Lily finding out and going into a strop and major drama happening!

AW. SO DAMN SWEET!