I feel like I just watched an awesome deleted scene

lol, I am amused at how you ended this. XD

Lol. ... It's like... Why ... How did u get the idea to write about this, hehe.

Oh, I didn't get what this story is about but that was funny at the end.

that didn't really feel like a ending.

Oh this was amazing!

If Kami was so wary of a tailed Goku with teenage horomones, it's hard to imagine his reaction to Vegeta "the Prince of ALL Saiyans" suddenly appearing on his doorstep with a much more powerful (and grown) Goku.

Actually, I'd like to read about Goku-kun and 'Geta's travels before the tournament.

Great plot, loveley story

great idea...poor goku ;)

oh, the whole plot is so intriguing...

but please do round up the whole Frieza episode where 'Geta left his fight unfinished when he was wished by Trunks.

I haven't read your other story (yet- I plan on getting round to it) but this was easy to understand on it's own, and I enjoyed reading about your theories on Saiyan telecommunication and the whole 'Saiyan puberty' thing. And the last line was great!

...That was...incredibly amusing even if it DID take me a moment or two to catch the punchline.

And one very dead North Kai later...

Exelent idea, it also reminded me of a theory of mine.

The Truffles brought space travel to the saiyans. They never had to develop it, so as a culture never learned to respect intellectual strength. A culture built purely around power isn't able to see value in those that are weak